2023屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫課件

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Wife: “Hw wuld yu describe me?”Husband: “ABCDEFGHIJK.”Wife: “What des that mean?”Husband: “Admirable, beautiful, cute, diligent, elegant, friendly, generus, and humrus.”Wife: “Ww, thank yu, but what des IJK mean?”Husband:
“I’m just kidding.”
Lking very unhappy, a pr man entered a dctr’s cnsulting-rm(診室).?The pr man said, “dctr, yu must help me! I swallwed(吞下) a penny abut a mnth ag."?The dctr said: “Gd heavens, man! Why have yu waited s lng? Why dn't yu cme t me n the day yu swallwed it?”The pr man replied：
“T tell yu the truth, dctr, I didn't need the mney s badly then."
提供一段350詞左右的語(yǔ)言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和所表示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫（150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一片與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。
開(kāi)端、發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)局
保持中心思想、意義連貫、文句流暢
A shrt stry is a kind f fictin abut imagined events and characters.
Five key elements f a shrt stry:
1. character
2. setting(backgrund)
3. cnflict(truble)
2. setting investigatr背景調(diào)查員
3. cnflict finder 沖突發(fā)現(xiàn)者
4. plt wizard 劇情魔術(shù)師
5. theme discverer 主題探索者
1. character analyst 角色分析師
Wh are the majr characters in this shrt stry?what is their relatinship?Hw did the character feel at the beginning f the stry?
character analyst
When did the stry happen?
setting investigatr
cnflict finder
what is the cnflict（truble）at the beginning f the stry?
Wh ?what?Hw ?
Della and Jim. They are a married cuple
Desperate/Frustrate
At Christmas when peple exchange gifts as a custm
They lived in extremely pverty
Hw did the writer vividly shw these feeling?
Find sme sentences with vivid descriptins that shw her desperatin and frustratin
There was clearly nthing t d but sb n the shabby cuch.
lking ut unhappily at a gray cat walking alng a gray fence in a gray yard.
She had been saving every penny she culd fr mnths.
?Her eyes were shining brilliantly, but her face had lst its clr within twenty secnds.?
cnflict finder
It suddenly ccured t her that she culd sell her hair t buy an expensive gift fr Jim
She was srrwful because she had t buy the gift at the expense f her belved hair
her lve fr Jim
her lve fr her hair
Staring int the mirrr, she fund her hair reached b ellw her knees, shining like brwn water fall.
she std still while a few tears splashed/dripped/streamed dwn n the flr.
With brilliant sparkle still in her eyes, she danced/dashed/rushed f the dr and dwn t the street.
vivid use f language t frm an image r picture
2.sacrifice
theme discverer
It is lve and sacrifice that make peplle truly wealthy.
lipsfacedancegrin
eyessb. tightlytears
eyeseye brwsmuthjaw
bdy lauguage
raised high
in the shape f an “”
curling int a smile
lighting up
frm ear t ear
hug/embrace
splashing/welling
Della delightedly present the gift and tld the truth.
Jim was deeply mved and hugged her in his arms.
Jim tk ut a package
What might Jim's reactin be?
He was surprised ( shcked/stunned/dumbfunded)He was frustrated (dismay)
Inside Jim’s package……
The dr pened and Jim stepped in
Design M-bridge
Analyze the reading 分析閱讀材料
Build the framewrk構(gòu)建故事框架
Cmb the pltlines梳理情節(jié)發(fā)展
Design the M-bridge設(shè)計(jì)續(xù)寫線橋
Extend the creatin拓展創(chuàng)造思維
One pssible versin fr reference
The dr pened and Jim stepped in.?Staring Della’s eyes shining with anticipatin, Jim widened his eyes at the sight f her new haircut, and squeesed ut a faint smile t mask his inner dismay. Della danced twards him at a brisk pace and spread ut her palm with the shiny chain inside, saying gently“Merry Christmas， hney!”Realizing Della bught the gift at the expense f her belved hair, Jim was reduced t tears with red-rimmed eyes and embraced her tightly in his arms. While mildly strking her shrt hair, he murmured in a chked vice, “I’ve als gt a gift fr yu!” He reached fr a package and unwrapped it.
Fulfill the expressins完成任務(wù)表達(dá)
Generate the prduct形成續(xù)寫作品
Highlight the underlined標(biāo)注要點(diǎn)信息