2023屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫課件

這是一份2023屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫課件，共34頁。PPT課件主要包含了content，高考真題，解題技巧詳解，高級詞匯句式，Part 01，考查要點，考查能力，評分原則，失誤總結(jié)，Part 02等內(nèi)容，歡迎下載使用。
首先,要把握故事的寫作意圖和目的以及作者對人物、事件的情感和態(tài)度;其次,對故事情節(jié)的起承轉(zhuǎn)合要了然于胸;再次,對整個語篇的行文結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作手段要心中有數(shù);最后,熟悉作者為了突出寫作主題和意圖而采用的寫作手法。這一切都是考生對故事的發(fā)展和結(jié)局進(jìn)行合理想象并進(jìn)行讀后續(xù)寫的前提。
首先,考生要圍繞寫作主題,遵循作者的情感態(tài)度和故事情節(jié),對故事的發(fā)展和結(jié)局進(jìn)行合理想象,對故事情節(jié)進(jìn)行合理設(shè)置;然后,使用準(zhǔn)確的詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)以及合理的語篇結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行敘事表意。
3.創(chuàng)新思維表達(dá)能力。
該題型要求考生在理解閱讀材料的同時,在原文脈絡(luò)和語言特點的框架內(nèi)對故事的發(fā)展和結(jié)局進(jìn)行聯(lián)想、創(chuàng)新表達(dá),使續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與原文渾然一體,使故事雖有起伏,但最終有一個合理的結(jié)局。
1.詞數(shù)適當(dāng)(詞數(shù)少于130的,從總分中減去2分);2.與短文和所給段落開頭語的銜接程度;3.內(nèi)容的豐富性(浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫還應(yīng)注意對所標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語的使用情況); 4.所用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性;5.上下文的連貫性;6.拼寫、標(biāo)點符號的準(zhǔn)確性;7.字跡工整,卷面整潔。
1.續(xù)寫的故事缺乏想象力,敘述單一,內(nèi)容簡單,詞數(shù)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)少于150。甚至有些續(xù)寫內(nèi)容僅僅是原文內(nèi)容的簡單重復(fù),故事沒有波瀾、缺乏新意。2.有些考生在續(xù)寫時走向了另一個極端,想象力非常豐富,但情節(jié)荒誕離奇,不符合文化常識和行文邏輯。3.續(xù)寫第一段中的情節(jié)與第二段的首句沒有銜接或產(chǎn)生斷裂,導(dǎo)致故事情節(jié)"卡殼"。4.單詞拼寫錯誤和時態(tài)錯誤較多。這兩方面的失誤是低級錯誤,是寫作的"硬傷",容易使閱卷者因反感而直接降檔。
1.精讀文章,確定文章線索。
每個作者都有自己獨特的寫作思路,考生可通過精讀文章找到該篇文章的寫作線索,比如文章是以時間為線索還是以空間為線索來寫的,這樣有利于考生"順藤摸瓜"。
2.仔細(xì)審題,明確續(xù)寫要求。
要注意短文續(xù)寫的具體要求,如詞數(shù)限制、有無標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語的使用要求和續(xù)寫段落的首句提示語,從而做到"心中有數(shù)"。
3.回讀原文,揣摩續(xù)寫思路。
根據(jù)寫作要求,快速回讀短文,順著原文作者的思路,結(jié)合續(xù)寫段落給出的提示語,充分發(fā)揮想象,構(gòu)思完整的故事情節(jié),確定續(xù)寫段落的思路;若短文中含有帶下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語,還要結(jié)合這些關(guān)鍵詞語,最終確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。
4.擬寫草稿,修改錯詞病句。
在確定了寫作思路之后,最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合原文內(nèi)容和提示語擬寫草稿。擬寫時,注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性、語言的豐富性,并通過正確使用句與句之間的連接詞,使所寫內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、行文流暢連貫。
5.檢查續(xù)寫內(nèi)容,謄寫文字。
打好草稿后,考生要通讀自己所續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容,檢查續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容是否符合邏輯,與原文和續(xù)寫段落給出的提示語是否連貫,全文的故事情節(jié)是否完整。涉及關(guān)鍵詞語的要標(biāo)注出來,并確認(rèn)數(shù)量是否達(dá)到要求。還要檢查詞數(shù)是否達(dá)標(biāo)、標(biāo)點符號的使用和字母大小寫是否正確等。最后在謄寫文字時,務(wù)必做到字跡工整、卷面整潔。
構(gòu)織畫面,合理自然收尾
1.建議考生根據(jù)原文語境構(gòu)織故事發(fā)展的畫面,即事件的起因、經(jīng)過等。2.續(xù)寫情節(jié)一般為故事的高潮或延續(xù),可根據(jù)所續(xù)寫兩段的提示語判斷第一段發(fā)生了什么曲折事件;再依據(jù)上下文邏輯和生活常識找到續(xù)寫第二段的線索,且第二段一般是故事的結(jié)局,即第一段出現(xiàn)問題,第二段解決問題。3.續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容要積極、健康向上,把人和事物美好的一面展示出來;在第二段結(jié)尾處要有恰當(dāng)?shù)那楦?、態(tài)度的表達(dá),從而使故事的主題得到升華。4.針對標(biāo)有下劃線關(guān)鍵詞語的題目,構(gòu)織有關(guān)關(guān)鍵詞語的畫面,與兩段的提示語進(jìn)行匹配,創(chuàng)設(shè)聯(lián)系,然后判斷哪些是屬于問題段(第一段)中的詞匯,哪些是解決問題段(第二段)中的詞匯。
善用詞句,豐富細(xì)節(jié)描寫
描寫包括對人物的動作、語言、心理、外貌、性格的描寫,以及對環(huán)境和場景的描寫。它作為記敘文的一種輔助的表達(dá)方式,對增強文章的表現(xiàn)力有重要的作用。它要求考生善于捕捉、刻畫細(xì)節(jié),有時還可以用比喻、擬人、夸張等修辭手法。一篇好的作文往往會因為細(xì)節(jié)描寫而出彩。同樣,議論、抒情的表達(dá)方式對記敘文主題的展現(xiàn)也有重要的作用?？忌谄綍r多注意積累各種情緒類、動作類、環(huán)境類等細(xì)節(jié)描寫的詞語和表達(dá),還要多練習(xí)高級句式和語法結(jié)構(gòu),提升語言的生動性和豐富性。對于細(xì)節(jié)描寫的一些必備素材詳見高
前后呼應(yīng),展現(xiàn)語篇連貫
考生在續(xù)寫時,要注意文章前后呼應(yīng)、銜接自然、意義連貫。內(nèi)容連貫:續(xù)寫部分要緊扣所給文本故事大意,與寫作意圖保持高度一致。語句連貫:在寫作時要關(guān)注段落內(nèi)部句與句之間的銜接,續(xù)寫內(nèi)容與段落首句之間的銜接、兩個續(xù)寫段落之間的銜接以及續(xù)寫段落與所給文本之間的前后呼應(yīng)。語言風(fēng)格連貫:續(xù)寫部分的語言風(fēng)格要與所給文本的語言風(fēng)格保持一致。結(jié)構(gòu)連貫:續(xù)寫完成后要使整篇文章前后呼應(yīng)、邏輯通順、結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
　　It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.　　We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.? His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn n my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn't ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. "Dn't be late fr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep t the track s that yu dn't get lst!" "OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (編織的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. ? Paragraph 2:We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark.
續(xù)寫第一段開頭語"Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse"是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點,可以從兔子出現(xiàn)后發(fā)生的事情入手進(jìn)行擴展,可以寫馬因受到驚嚇而狂奔,也可以寫作者和父親因追趕兔子而迷路,還可以寫見到兔子后人物的反應(yīng),無論從哪個角度去拓展,都要注意與續(xù)寫第二段開頭語的呼應(yīng)。續(xù)寫第二段開頭語"We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark"呼應(yīng)前文Uncle Paul的囑托——不要誤了吃晚飯、不要迷路,可以從如何尋路返回入手續(xù)寫短文。前文提示農(nóng)場附近有河流,并且"river"為標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語,所以可以從沿著河流回到農(nóng)場這一角度進(jìn)行拓展。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. It was s cute that Dad and I decided t chase it. After a while, we gt lst in the frest. There was nthing in sight but the trees. "We may nt be able t g back t the farm huse in time fr supper," I thught t myself. After a series f fruitless attempts t find the way ut, we felt hungry and tired.?Paragraph 2: We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark. We gt stuck in the frest. And an unexpected shwer added t the difficulty f finding ur way, because we culdn't see the track in the rain. I was n the edge f despair when my father said, "Dn't wrry, my by. I remember there is a river near the farm huse. Find the river and we will be back there." Finally, we fund the river and gt back.
◆ 表示"開心、快樂、興奮、激動"
1.寬慰地笑了smile with relief2.突然大笑起來burst int laughter3.某人嘴角掛著微笑with a smile n ne's lips 4.難以形容的開心a feeling f indescribable jy5.嫣然一笑/淡淡一笑smile sweetly/faintly6.使某人心情大好brighten ne's md 7.精神高漲be in high spirits 8.心情很好 in a gd md9.欣喜若狂be ver the mn/be wild with jy10.既興奮又開心a mixture f excitement and happiness11.一想到……就欣喜若狂g wild with jy at the thught f12.Her face was shining with jy.她的臉上洋溢著喜悅。13.She wre a big smile n her face.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。14.The by's heart was verflwing with jy.這個男孩滿心歡喜。15.Her vice trembled with excitement. 她激動得聲音顫抖。
◆ 表示"難過、傷心、沮喪"
1.強烈的失落感a strng sense f lss2.陷入絕望fall int despair 3.快要哭了clse t tears4.某人淚流滿面with tears streaming dwn ne's face5.情緒低落in lw spirits 6.強忍住淚水fight back tears7.令某人失望的是t ne's disappintment8.感到失望和沮喪feel disappinted and frustrated9.擦去某人臉上的淚水wipe tears frm ne's face10.Tears rll dwn his face.眼淚沿著他的面頰流下來。11.Tears well up in his eyes.他熱淚盈眶。12.Her eyes were filled with tears. 她眼里噙滿了淚水。13.She wre a big smile n her face.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。14.The by's heart was verflwing with jy.這個男孩滿心歡喜。15.Her vice trembled with excitement. 她激動得聲音顫抖。
1.強烈的失落感a strng sense f lss2.陷入絕望fall int despair 3.快要哭了clse t tears4.某人淚流滿面with tears streaming dwn ne's face 5.情緒低落in lw spirits 6.強忍住淚水fight back tears7.令某人失望的是t ne's disappintment8.感到失望和沮喪feel disappinted and frustrated9.擦去某人臉上的淚水wipe tears frm ne's face10.Tears rll dwn his face.眼淚沿著他的面頰流下來。11.Tears well up in his eyes.他熱淚盈眶。12.Her eyes were filled with tears. 她眼里噙滿了淚水。13.She sbbed with her face buried in her hands.她掩面啜泣。14.She lked pale and upset. 她看起來臉色蒼白,一臉苦惱。15.She's been very depressed and upset abut the whle situatin. 整個境況使她感到非常沮喪,心煩意亂。
◆ 表示"焦慮、憤怒、恐懼"1.怒視某人glare at sb. 2.驚恐地in panic/terrr3.滿腔怒火be filled with anger 4.恐懼的感覺a feeling f fear 5.憂慮的目光/面容/表情an anxius lk/face/expressin 6.His anger biled ver.他的憤怒爆發(fā)了。7.He culd hardly/scarcely cntain his rage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。8.His vice trembled with anger.他的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。9.She felt her stmach knt with fear.她感到害怕,心都揪緊了。10.When I saw a snake,I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.當(dāng)我看到一條蛇時,我感到非常害怕,以至于我的喉嚨發(fā)緊,膝蓋發(fā)軟。11.When a tiger was appraching me, I frze with terrr,t scared t mve an inch.當(dāng)一只老虎向我逼近時,我嚇得呆住了,一動也不敢動。
1.抬頭/點頭/低頭/搖頭raise/nd/lwer/shake ne's head2.轉(zhuǎn)過頭去turn ne's head 3.抬起頭來hld ne's head high4.羞愧地低著頭hang ne's head in shame5.頭部受傷suffer head injuries
1.緊緊擁抱hug tightly 2.揮舞手臂wave ne's arm3.舉手raise ne's hand 4.把某人抱在懷里hld sb. in ne's arms5.伸出雙臂摟著某人 put ne's arms arund gave her an encuraging pat n the shulder. 他輕拍她肩膀以示鼓勵。7.She leapt ut f the back seat, and gave him a hug. 她從后座上跳了出來,給了他一個擁抱。
1.掙扎著起床struggle t get ut f the bed2.溜進(jìn)slip int/steal int3.搖搖晃晃地站起身來stagger t ne's feet4.前往head fr/twards 5.沖進(jìn)rush int6.漫無目的地在大街上走著walk n the street aimlessly7.I dragged myself ut f bed and walked int the bathrm. 我吃力地從床上爬起來走進(jìn)浴室。8.He sprang t his feet and rushed after her. 他立刻站起來,沖過去追她。
1.專心地聽listen attentively 2.掃視glance at3.直視某人的眼睛lk sb. straight in the eye4.嚴(yán)肅地說speak in a serius vice 5.好奇地問ask with curisity 6.自言自語talk t neself7.陷入沉思be lst in/absrbed in/buried in thught8.She began t hear her wn nervus breathing.她開始聽到自己緊張的呼吸聲。9.He was aware f the wind in his face.他感到風(fēng)在臉上吹拂。10.She wke t feel a searing pain in her feet. 她醒來后感到腳上一陣灼熱之痛。11.I can smell smething burning in the kitchen.我聞到廚房有東西燒焦了。
1.雨季the rainy seasn 2.放晴clear up3.暴風(fēng)雨之夜a strmy night 4.一陣清新的微風(fēng)a fresh breeze5.難以忍受的熱unbearable heat 6.烏云密布be full f dark cluds 7.狂風(fēng)暴雨fierce/heavy/vilent strms8.下傾盆大雨be raining cats and dgs 9.正在融化的冰melting ice10.The sun is shining brightly in the sky.太陽在天空中明亮地照耀著。11.It was freezing cld. Even wrse, they lst their way. 天氣極冷。更糟糕的是,他們還迷路了。
1.山間小路a muntain track2.擋住某人的路blck ne's way3.茂密的森林a dense frest 4.崎嶇不平、多石的土地rugh, stny grund5.The hills are bathed in the sunlight. 群山沐浴在陽光下。6.The water glitters in the sunlight. 水面在陽光下閃閃發(fā)光。7.The smell f the sea called up memries f her childhd. 大海的氣息勾起了她對童年的回憶。
1.繁忙的街道busy streets 2.不斷聚集的人群gathering crwds 3.人來人往many peple cming and ging4.繁忙擁擠的城市busy and crwded cities5.昏暗的路燈燈光下in the dim light f streetlamps6.The streets were nisy and full f activity. 街上熙熙攘攘,車水馬龍。7.Heavy traffic blcked the rad. 擁擠的車輛阻塞了道路。
1.雙下巴a duble chin 2.粗糙的雙手rugh hands 3.臉色蒼白a pale face 4.中年男子a middle-aged man5.留著齊肩發(fā)wear shulder-length hair6.飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的臉a weather-beaten face7.一個衣衫襤褸的姑娘a girl in rags8.She is charming when she smiles.她笑起來的時候很迷人。9.He had beautiful blue eyes I had never seen. 他有一雙我從未見過的漂亮的藍(lán)眼睛。10.My uncle is f average/medium height with a pair f thick glasses.我叔叔中等身高,戴一副厚眼鏡。11.He is abut 1.75 meters in height and has brad shulders.他身高大約一米七五,肩膀?qū)掗煛?2.She is tall and slim with waist-length hair.她又高又苗條,長發(fā)齊腰。