高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)--概要寫作 寫的環(huán)節(jié) 課件

這是一份高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)--概要寫作 寫的環(huán)節(jié) 課件，共20頁(yè)。PPT課件主要包含了內(nèi)容介紹，重難點(diǎn)突破，獨(dú)立表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)， 因果關(guān)系， 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系， 對(duì)比關(guān)系， 選擇關(guān)系， 遞進(jìn)關(guān)系， 條件關(guān)系， 讓步關(guān)系等內(nèi)容，歡迎下載使用。
同義替換 （paraphrase）
要點(diǎn)與要點(diǎn)間的關(guān)系
due t\ n this accunt\ since\ result frm\ wing taccrdingly\ fr the reasn\ therefre\ cnsequentlylead t \ cntribute t \ result in
hwever\ still\ yet\ while \nevertheless...
remte t\ different frm\ppsed t\rather than\ inferir t
neither…nr\ either…r\ bth…and
in spite f \ despite\even if \ althugh\ thugh\ as
nt nly…but als\ as well as…
if\ whether
詞性轉(zhuǎn)換；詞與詞、短語(yǔ)、固定句式替換
應(yīng)用語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性
段落與段落之間的關(guān)系 （句子承接 連接副詞）
并列遞進(jìn)因果轉(zhuǎn)折比較時(shí)間解釋結(jié)論
equally\additinally\as well
mrever\ what’s mre\ what’ wrse
since\ hence\ therefre\ thereby\
nevertheless\nnetheless\actually\in effect\n the cntrary
by cntrast\ in cntrast t
the?mment\meanwhile\befre lng
that is\in ther wrds\fr?instance\ and s?n\ and?the?like
in a wrd\n the whle\in shrt\briefly\t sum up\ in all
Nt all screen time is equally bad fr …perfrmance; watching TV and playing vide games negatively impacted …Watching Tv impacted teens in…and yunger children in…; teen scres appeared t be wrse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability f …Playing vide games nly impacts the academic cmpsite scre in teens…been linked t declines in.. imprve mtr…Mre research is needed. …changed…thrughut the day… measurement tls
Nt all screen time is equally bad fr …perfrmance; watching TV and playing vide games negatively impacted …fr ...
nt equally bad
the influence varies
negatively impacted
d harm\ d bad fr sb\damaging
解釋關(guān)系：while\ and\ t be exact
A study reveals that the influence f screen time n children varies, while watching televisin and playing vide games can d the harm.
2. Watching Tv impacted teens in…and yunger children in…; teen scres appeared t be wrse…; replaces time…; reduces the ability f …
affect\ influence
ccupy\take up \ waste
time spent living a nrmal\ healthy life
time spent studying,sleeping, talking and getting sme exercises
reduce the ability
weaken\ decrease the ability
ccupy\take up
要點(diǎn)間的關(guān)系—對(duì)比因果
TV watching exerts negative influence n teens wh suffer mre than yunger nes, as it wastes time, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking.
3. Playing vide games nly impacts the academic cmpsite scre in teens…been linked t declines in.. imprve mtr…
academic cmpsite scre
academic perfrmance
要點(diǎn)間的關(guān)系--解釋、對(duì)比
Teens’ academic perfrmance is affected by their playing vide games, decreasing memry and sleep while f help t ther abilities.
4. Mre research is needed. …changed…thrughut the day… measurement tls
necessary\ be in need
vary\ develp
thrughut the day
increase in time
measurement
ways t measure
necessary\ be f need
要點(diǎn)間的關(guān)系—因果、并列
T keep track f children’s interactins with technlgy as time ges by, mre studies are necessary.
interactin with technlgy
A study reveals that the influence f screen time n children varies, and watching televisin and playing vide games can d the harm.
TV watching exerts negative influence n teens wh suffer mre than yunger nes, as it ccupies the time spent living a nrmal life, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking.
Hwever\ Actually,
Fr ne thing,
要點(diǎn)全面，四段共四個(gè)要點(diǎn)，缺一不可。有否抄寫原文。人稱時(shí)態(tài)是否正確，全文用第三人稱寫，四個(gè)段落全部用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，說(shuō)明一個(gè)客觀問(wèn)題。是否有語(yǔ)法、拼寫錯(cuò)誤。銜接連貫。第二點(diǎn)和第三點(diǎn)是并列關(guān)系，都是講述電子產(chǎn)品對(duì)孩子的危害，所以可以用“besides”“what’s mre”“additinally”等。詞數(shù)控制。全文控制在60詞左右，不少于40詞，不多于80詞。
A study reveals that the influence f screen time varies, while watching televisin and playing vide games harm. Fr ne thing, TV watching negatively affects teens, as it wastes time, weakening their pwers f cncentratin and thinking. Fr anther, teens’ academic perfrmance is affected by their playing vide games, decreasing memry and sleep while f help in ther ways. Actually, t keep track f children’s interactins with technlgy as time ges by, mre studies are necessary. (79 wrds)