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2025--2026年人教版中考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)分類提高綜合練習(xí)1:應(yīng)用文寫作【含答案 word版】
一、人與自我(本大題共4小題)
1.書面表達(dá)
66. 忙碌的初中生活使我們的課余生活越來越單一,所以學(xué)校打算開展“after-class clubs”。社團(tuán)活動(dòng)可以讓我們廣交朋友,鍛煉身體,增長(zhǎng)見識(shí)。假如你是七年級(jí)三班的李華,今年12歲。根據(jù)你的興趣愛好,在以下幾個(gè)社團(tuán)Art Club, Music Club, Basketball Team, English Club,History Club當(dāng)中選擇一個(gè)喜歡的,申請(qǐng)加入。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示,用英文寫一份加入社團(tuán)申請(qǐng)書。
要求:(1)申請(qǐng)書包含表格中所提供的要點(diǎn);(2)詞數(shù):60左右(短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
參考詞匯:make friends, take exercise, open one’s eyes
Dear Sir,
I am
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.學(xué)校Teenager英語俱樂部要舉辦一期關(guān)于未來生活暢想的演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示,以“My life in the future”為題寫一篇演講稿。短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):
對(duì)你的未來生活描述包括:未來的環(huán)境(空氣、樹等情況);未來你的職業(yè)生活;未來你的家庭生活(例如機(jī)器人做家務(wù));未來你的業(yè)余生活(身體鍛煉、旅游、志愿活動(dòng)等)。
要求:
1、文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校、班級(jí)等信息。
2、不少于80詞。
My life in the future
Hello, dear friends! I’m glad to stand here and share my life in the future with you.
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3.假定你是李華,昨日你校舉辦了學(xué)生英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,寫一封郵件,向你的朋友John介紹本次活動(dòng)。
1、比賽時(shí)間;
2、比賽地點(diǎn);
3、比賽情況;
4、比賽結(jié)果;
5、你的感受。
注意:
1、詞數(shù)80詞左右;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2、根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)寫作,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名等信息。
參考詞匯:英語演講比賽English speech competition
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday. ______________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.目前中國(guó)中小學(xué)每周開設(shè)一節(jié)勞動(dòng)課。John是一名美國(guó)中學(xué)生, 他對(duì)中國(guó)的勞動(dòng)教育(Labor Education)很感興趣。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信,向他介紹中國(guó)的勞動(dòng)教育并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?內(nèi)容:
勞動(dòng)教育的意義(比如:促進(jìn)智力發(fā)展promote intellectual development)(至少兩點(diǎn))。
具體的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)(比如:植樹)(至少兩個(gè))。
要求:
要涵蓋以上內(nèi)容要點(diǎn), 可適當(dāng)增加調(diào)節(jié);
80詞左右(開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。
Dear John,
I am glad that you show great interest in Labor Education in China. Let me give you a brief introduction about it.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、人與社會(huì)(本大題共22小題)
5.假如你是李輝,你的英國(guó)筆友Peter想了解你近期參加的一次學(xué)校組織的旅行的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖給Peter寫一封回信介紹一下你的學(xué)校旅行經(jīng)歷。
注意:1、60字左右。
2、可以在思維導(dǎo)圖的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
3、文章開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
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Yours,
Li Hui
6.期中考試之后,你在學(xué)習(xí)、生活、業(yè)余愛好等方面有什么新的打算嗎?請(qǐng)給你的朋友Bob寫一封電子郵件,講述一下你的新計(jì)劃。80詞以上。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Bob,
How is it going? I make some new plans for myself. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.健康的身體是我們中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的保證,所以擁有良好的生活習(xí)慣十分重要。為了了解同學(xué)們的良好生活習(xí)慣,學(xué)校要開展以“My Good Living Habits”為題的英文演講比賽。假如你是Fu Xing, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示完成你的演講稿,談一談你的良好生活習(xí)慣及其重要性。
內(nèi)容提示:
要求:
1、短文須包括提示里的所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2、80詞左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。
My Good Living Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m Fu Xing. Today, I’m very happy to share my good living habits with all of you.
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I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy.
8.假定你是李華,最近收到美國(guó)筆友Peter的電子郵件,想要了解你的研學(xué)之旅。請(qǐng)你閱讀后回復(fù)。詞數(shù)70左右。
注意事項(xiàng):
1、必須包含所有提示信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2、意思清楚,表達(dá)通順、行文連貫,書寫規(guī)范;
3、請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear from you. I am willing to share my trip with you.
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Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
9.為別人點(diǎn)一盞燈,照亮別人,也照亮了自己。本卷閱讀理解A篇談到招募志愿者海報(bào)。上月 (3月15日周六),英語老師也帶領(lǐng)了同學(xué)們到兒童醫(yī)院做志愿活動(dòng),并要求大家寫一篇日記描述此次志愿活動(dòng)的過程。假如你是張華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示,完成日記。
要求:1、短文應(yīng)包括表格中所有的寫作要點(diǎn),條理清楚,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2、短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名;
3、詞數(shù)80-100,短文格式已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Saturday, March 15th????Sunny
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10.隨著人工智能(AI)技術(shù)日新月異的發(fā)展,一些同學(xué)已經(jīng)在學(xué)習(xí)中嘗試使用AI。假設(shè)你是李輝,你校英語??瘜⑴e辦以“智慧學(xué)習(xí),善用AI”為主題的演講比賽,以引導(dǎo)同學(xué)們正確使用AI工具,做學(xué)習(xí)的主人。請(qǐng)按照要求寫一篇英文演講稿。
內(nèi)容包括:
1、提出觀點(diǎn);
2、如何使用AI;
3、表達(dá)期待。
注意:
1、詞數(shù)80-100;開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱等。
Dear fellow students,
At present, some students have tried using AI tools in their studies.
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Thank you for listening.
11.假如你是李華,剛剛收到好友Tom的一封電子郵件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)Tom郵件中反映的問題,結(jié)合表格中的要點(diǎn)提示,給他提出合理的建議(至少三條)。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m writing to tell you that I can’t go to see Ne zha with you. I have a bad cold. I feel sick and I often catch colds. Can you give me some advice on how to keep healthy?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Tom
注意事項(xiàng):
(1)郵件可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫;
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息;
(3)詞數(shù)80左右;郵件的首尾和第一句已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry to know that you have a bad cold.
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Yours,
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12.假如你是劉宇,你收到了筆友Tom的郵件。Tom酷愛打籃球,但他的父母反對(duì)他花大量時(shí)間練習(xí)籃球,而是覺得他應(yīng)該專注于學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容,用英語給Tom回復(fù)郵件,說一說你的看法,并提出你的建議。
要求:1、郵件須包含提示要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2、語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
3、文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4、詞數(shù):不少于60詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to receive your e-mail. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Yours,
Liu Yu
13.要么讀書,要么旅行,身體和靈魂,總有一個(gè)在路上。旅行,領(lǐng)略人間美景,品味百味人生,豐盈生命,感悟世間百態(tài),了解風(fēng)土人情。假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校英語社正開展以“A nice trip”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)閱讀下面的提示寫一篇短文投稿。
(1)Where did you go and who did you go with?
(2)What did you do during the trip?
(3)…
注意:(1)短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。
(2)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Travelling is a good way for us to enjoy nature and learn about culture. I once had a nice trip. ___________________________________________________________________________
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I learned a lot from this trip. I will never forget it.
14.我國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng),博大精深。我們隨時(shí)都能感受到傳統(tǒng)文化的氣息,它綻放在異彩紛呈的民俗節(jié)日中。假如你是李華,上周五,我校組織了“存心寄華夏詮釋中國(guó)紅”的藝術(shù)展覽活動(dòng) (school art fair),你的英國(guó)朋友Jack對(duì)此很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息,向Jack介紹此次活動(dòng)。
參考詞匯:red packets 紅包;paper cutting 剪紙
注意:詞數(shù)80左右,已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等內(nèi)容。
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. ________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.書面表達(dá)。
Kevin 一家第一次在中國(guó)過春節(jié),除夕(the New Year's Eve)他們都在忙碌。假設(shè)你是Kevin,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給提示寫一封電子郵件告訴你的美國(guó)朋友Jill你和家人正在做什么。
提示:1.奶奶和媽媽在包餃子;
2.爺爺在看電視;
3.爸爸在拍照片,想要寄給美國(guó)的朋友;
4.弟弟在給他中國(guó)的朋友打電話。
要求:1.包含以上所給要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2.條理清楚、意思連貫、語句通順、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確;
3.50詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Jill,
It's the New Year's Eve.Love,
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16.書面表達(dá)。
假如你是劉偉,你在英國(guó)的筆友Jim對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日很感興趣,他來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給他回一封電子郵件,簡(jiǎn)單介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。今天是端午節(jié),請(qǐng)你重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)人一般是如何過端午節(jié)的。
注意:1. 80~100詞左右。
2.可以結(jié)合自己的情況適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以便行文連貫。
3.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail.
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What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
17.假設(shè)你是Li Tao,以下是你的美國(guó)筆友Steve發(fā)給你的郵件。請(qǐng)閱讀郵件內(nèi)容,用英語給Steve寫一封郵件回復(fù)。
要求:
1、語句通順,表述連貫,書寫工整;
2、回復(fù)須回答郵件中的所有問題,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
3、詞數(shù):60詞左右 (短文開頭和結(jié)尾部分已給出,且不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Dear Steve,
I’m very glad to get your email. _______________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Tao
18.根據(jù)要求完成作文,并將答案寫在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置。
Please write a diary about your last school trip.
要求:
1、文中不可以出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名;
2、60詞左右。
Friday, 30 May
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19.假如你是李華,你的同學(xué)王明最近遇到了一些困擾,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容提示,給他提 一些建議。
要求:1、應(yīng)包含所有提示內(nèi)容,語言流暢,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2、詞數(shù)不少于80詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3、不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、人名等。
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear about your trouble.
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I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
20.每個(gè)人在生活中都有壓力,我們應(yīng)該正確面對(duì)壓力,保持積極、健康的心態(tài)。假如你叫李明,你的朋友小冬給你發(fā)郵件說他最近很不開心。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的提示,給小冬回一封不少于80詞的電子郵件,并給他提一些建議。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Xiaodong,
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days.
Yours,
Li Ming
21.第二天,Yifei和她的同學(xué)們開啟了研學(xué)之旅新一站——參觀臨汾博物館。假如你是Yifei,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格信息,續(xù)寫研學(xué)日記。
要求:
1、包含表格內(nèi)所有提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
2、不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名;
3、書寫工整,卷面整潔,詞數(shù)不少于80詞;
參考詞匯:文物cultural relics
Thursday, 12 June
Today was a day to remember.
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22.假如你是李華,你最好的朋友王磊最近很煩惱,他的父母逼著他去學(xué)鋼琴,但他自己想去學(xué)籃球,雙方各執(zhí)己見,難以達(dá)成一致而導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件給王磊出出主意。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)勸王磊跟父母好好聊一聊;
(2)列舉分析學(xué)鋼琴和學(xué)籃球各自有何利弊;
(3)不回避問題,不過于擔(dān)憂,積極尋求解決的辦法。
要求:
(1)不少于80詞;
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人信息;
(3)必須包含以上提示信息,可在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。
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23.根據(jù)所給的中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50詞的英語文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出真實(shí)的校名和姓名。
假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友Jack給你發(fā)來電子郵件,詢問你最喜愛的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)他的郵件,內(nèi)容包括:你去了哪里,什么時(shí)候去的,和誰去的以及在那里你(們)做了些什么。
提示詞語:places of interest, take photos, eat delicious food, experience different cultures
提示問題:????
● Where and when did you go?
● Who did you go with?
● What did you do there?
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Hua
24.在日常學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們經(jīng)常需要與人合作( cooperate)。假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)你就如何成為一名優(yōu)秀的合作伙伴寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容包括:
(1)合作的技巧(如耐心傾聽,禮貌建議……);
(2)合作的意義(如相互學(xué)習(xí)……)。
要求:
(1)80詞左右(標(biāo)題和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.??
25.假如你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,將在學(xué)校的升旗儀式上以“friendship”為主題進(jìn)行演講,請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
要求:
(1) 字?jǐn)?shù):80詞左右(文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。
Good morning, everyone!
Just as an English saying goes, no man is an island. Everyone needs friends.
Thank you for your time.
26.忙碌而充實(shí)的初中學(xué)習(xí)即將結(jié)束,假如你是李華,下周將代表全體初中畢業(yè)生在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你回顧自己初中三年的學(xué)校生活,結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇演講稿,為此次發(fā)言做準(zhǔn)備。
要求:
1、內(nèi)容必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn),并補(bǔ)充1-2點(diǎn),適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);
2、語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
3、字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯:look back at, remember, knowledge, teach, solve the problem
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will come to an end soon. I’d like to say something.
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Thank you.
Li Hua
三、人與自然(本大題共2小題)
27.動(dòng)物是人類的朋友。然而,很多動(dòng)物處于危險(xiǎn)之中,瀕臨滅絕。雪豹就是其中之一。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示,寫一篇短文倡議人們保護(hù)雪豹 (snow leopard)。
要求:1、包含提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名;
3、不少于60詞。開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Boys and girls,
Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them?________________
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Let’s do something to make a difference!
28.動(dòng)物是人類的好朋友,學(xué)校英語社團(tuán)正在舉行主題為“My favorite animal”的演講比賽,假設(shè)你是李華,請(qǐng)寫一篇演講稿來介紹你最喜歡的動(dòng)物吧!
內(nèi)容包含:
(1)介紹你最喜愛的動(dòng)物,如性格,外貌等。
(2)描述你與它之間的特別的或者幸福的相處經(jīng)歷。
(3)動(dòng)物是人類的好朋友,呼吁人類保護(hù)動(dòng)物。
注意:
(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);??
(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal.
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四、請(qǐng)求與提供幫助(本大題共1小題)
29.在公園散步時(shí),你把書包忘在長(zhǎng)椅上了。書包里面有語文書、數(shù)學(xué)書、英語書和一些練習(xí)本,還有一個(gè)文具盒和一張學(xué)生卡,上面有你的姓名、班級(jí)、學(xué)校等信息。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息寫一則60詞左右的尋物啟事。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
I lost my schoolbag.
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五、希望和愿望(本大題共1小題)
30. 假如你是李華,即將進(jìn)入高中學(xué)習(xí),請(qǐng)你寫一封電子郵件給英國(guó)的筆友Linda,談?wù)勀銓?duì)高中生活的向往和擔(dān)憂,并請(qǐng)她給出建議。
參考詞匯:
注意:
1)信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名,校名和地名;
2)80詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));
3)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
參考答案
一、人與自我
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、個(gè)人興趣、個(gè)人情況
1.【答案】Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua from Class 3, Grade 7. I am 12 years old. I like playing basketball very much. I often play it on the playground with my friends after school. And I often watch the basketball games on TV.
I would like to join the Basketball Team because I want to take exercise and I want to make new friends, too. Also I can learn something about teamwork.
I am waiting for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】
這是一篇參加社團(tuán)的申請(qǐng)書。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料,然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般將來時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、居住環(huán)境、工作與職業(yè)
2.【答案】A possible version:
My life in the future
Hello, dear friends! I’m glad to stand here and share my life in the future with you.
In the future, our world will be very beautiful. The air will be clean like fresh rain. Many green trees will grow everywhere. I will become a doctor and help sick people feel better. At home, a friendly robot will do housework. It will cook dinner and clean rooms. My family will play games together in the garden. After work, I will ride my blue bike every evening. On holidays, I will visit the moon with my parents! I will also help old people in the park as a volunteer.
I believe my future life will be happy and exciting!
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇講稿;
②時(shí)態(tài):以“一般將來時(shí)”為主;
③提示:考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示中的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】 第一步,表明演講稿的意圖,分享關(guān)于未來生活的暢想(已給出);
第二步,具體闡述內(nèi)容,從“未來環(huán)境、職業(yè)生活、家庭生活、業(yè)余生活”等方面介紹未來生活的樣子;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)對(duì)未來生活的感受。
【提分詞匯】 ①help sb. do sth. 幫助某人做某事
②do housework 做家務(wù)
③after work 下班后
【提分句式】 ①I believe my future life will be happy and exciting! (省略that的賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、考試/競(jìng)賽
3.【答案】參考范文:
Dear John,
I’m so excited to talk with you about our English speech competition that was held yesterday.
It took place on the school playground at 3 p.m. 20 students took an active part in this wonderful event. All the students gathered to be the listeners. The speeches covered many subjects and most of the “competitors” performed well.
One of my classmates shared his thoughts about protecting our earth. He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. No wonder he won the first prize.
This competition helps us improve spoken English and learn more knowledge at the same time. We all look forward to joining it next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇電子郵件。
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過去時(shí)”。
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已明確給出,考生應(yīng)注意要點(diǎn)齊全,并可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)描述。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,表明寫作意圖。說明寫信的目的是與John分享昨天的英語演講比賽。
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹這次演講比賽的信息。
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)這次比賽對(duì)提升英語口語和學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)的幫助,以及大家對(duì)下次比賽的期待。
【提分詞匯】①competition比賽
②performed表演,表現(xiàn)
③realised意識(shí)到
【提分句式】①He talked about it so deeply that all of us realised the importance of protecting the environment. (so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、學(xué)校、日?;顒?dòng)
4.【答案】例文
Dear John,
I am glad that you show great interest in Labor Education in China. Let me give you a brief introduction about it. Labor Education is important and meaningful. We can learn some life skills and form good habits, which will help us a lot in the future. Also, it can promote the intellectual development of the students.
Do you know how to run the course in our school? Let me tell you. The school offers classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow vegetables. What’s more, the school has set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. Everyone can join the clubs they like. Our school also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
All in all, I love these useful activities.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,給John寫一封信,向他介紹中國(guó)的勞動(dòng)教育并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ? 時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的提示要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作意圖。對(duì)中國(guó)的勞動(dòng)教育表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣表示高興,并表示給他介紹中國(guó)的勞動(dòng)教育。(文章已給出);
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容,從勞動(dòng)教育的意義和具體的勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)等方面來敘述。
第三步,書寫總結(jié)。表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)(總而言之,我喜歡這些有用的活動(dòng)。),結(jié)束全文。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
show great interest in對(duì)……表現(xiàn)出極大的興趣
learn some life skills and form good habits學(xué)習(xí)一些生活技能并養(yǎng)成良好習(xí)慣
What’s more此外
make our school life more colorful and meaningful讓我們的學(xué)校生活更加豐富多彩和有意義
[高分句型]
We can learn some life skills and form good habits, which will help us a lot in the future.(非限制性定語從句)
he school offers classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow vegetables.(動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語)
Everyone can join the clubs they like.(限制定語從句)
Our school also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes.(賓語從句)
二、人與社會(huì)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、書面表達(dá)、哲理感悟、旅行
5.【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How is it going? I am very happy to tell you something about my school trip.
Last Saturday, we went on a school trip to the zoo by bus. We started at 8 am and arrived at about 8:30. There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on. We felt very excited to see them. The pandas looked so lovely, and the monkeys were very lively. We took many photos. In the afternoon, we also watched a bear show. It was wonderful.
This trip is really a great experience for me. Animals make our world colourful and we should protect them. Do you think so?
Yours,
Li Hui
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇書信作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):本文以“一般過去時(shí)”為主;
③提示:題目要求根據(jù)提示向筆友介紹近期參加的一次學(xué)校組織的旅行的經(jīng)歷,包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、具體活動(dòng)以及自己的收獲和感想。寫作時(shí)注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,開篇點(diǎn)題(已給出);
第二步,根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn),依次介紹參觀動(dòng)物園的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和具體活動(dòng);
第三步,最后談自己的收獲和感想。
【提分詞匯】①go on a trip to 到……去旅行
②and so on 等等
③take photos 拍照
【提分句式】①There are many animals in the zoo like pandas, monkeys, giraffes and so on.(用there be句型表示某地有某物)
②We felt very excited to see them.(動(dòng)詞不定式作原因狀語)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、方法/建議、計(jì)劃與安排
6.【答案】Dear Bob,
????How is it going these days? I make some new plans for myself.
????My first resolution has to do with self--improvement. I want to join an English club to improve my English. I want to get good grades next time. The second is about personal health. I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise. Finally, I would like to learn to take photos in my free time. I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.
????Do you have any new plans?
Yours,
Da Ming
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:書信作文,向朋友分享期中考試后的新計(jì)劃,屬于生活交流類;
②時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)為主,陳述計(jì)劃及意圖;
③提示:圍繞學(xué)習(xí)、生活、業(yè)余愛好三方面新計(jì)劃展開,內(nèi)容完整,符合郵件分享交流的邏輯。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,開篇問候,表明有新計(jì)劃分享;
第二步,依次闡述計(jì)劃:學(xué)習(xí)方面、生活方面、業(yè)余愛好方面,并提及會(huì)告知家人尋求幫助;
第三步,詢問對(duì)方是否有新計(jì)劃,結(jié)束郵件。
【提分詞匯】①self-improvement自我提升
②get grades取得成績(jī)
③so that以便于
【提分句式】①I want to join an English club to improve my English.(to do不定式作目的狀語)
②I am going to eat less junk food and do more exercise.(be going to結(jié)構(gòu)表將來)
③I will tell my family about my plans so that they can help me.(so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、健身/鍛煉、衛(wèi)生與健康、飲食
7.【答案】例文
My Good Living Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m Fu Xing. Today, I’m very happy to share my good living habits with all of you.
As for me, I have balanced eating habits. I usually have milk, eggs and bread for breakfast. Sometimes, I also have some fruit. For lunch, I often eat meat, vegetables and rice. For dinner, I love eating some fish and noodles.
I have other healthy living habits as well. I never stay up late and usually sleep for 9 hours every night. I think a good sleep helps me start a new day. I get up early in the morning. After that, I do exercise for 20 minutes. On weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family.
I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy.
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇演講稿;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生介紹了自己的健康生活習(xí)慣及其影響,注意要點(diǎn)齊全,邏輯清晰。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,表明寫作意圖(已給出)
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點(diǎn)介紹了三個(gè)健康生活習(xí)慣 (飲食、運(yùn)動(dòng)、作息) 以及這些習(xí)慣帶來的積極影響;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語(已給出)。
【提分詞匯】①balanced eating habits均衡的飲食習(xí)慣
②healthy living habits健康的生活習(xí)慣
③stay up late熬夜
④get up early早起
⑤go climbing爬山
【提分句式】I believe it is important to have good living habits because they make me happy. (賓語從句+原因狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、學(xué)校活動(dòng)、景點(diǎn)/建筑
8.【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear from you. I am willing to share my trip with you. Our class went on a school trip to an art museum. It was tiring but great fun!
In the morning, it was sunny and warm, we saw many colorful paintings. They looked real. The guide told us interesting stories about the artists. I was very interested. After lunch, we tried painting ourselves! It seemed easy, but it took time. Finally, I created my own works. Although I got paint all over my clothes and hands, I felt happy. Also, we took a lot of photos during the trip.
One thing I learned today: Art isn’t just about beautiful pictures. It’s a good way to share thoughts and feelings. All in all, it was really a day to remember.
Looking forward to your visit!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為電子郵件;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,先介紹學(xué)校旅行去了哪里以及天氣怎么樣;
第二步,具體介紹學(xué)校旅行中的活動(dòng)及感受;
第三步,書寫結(jié)束語,表達(dá)自己的收獲。
【提分詞匯】①art museum 藝術(shù)博物館
②all over 到處都是
③during the trip 在旅行期間
④a good way to 做某事的好方法
⑤all in all 總而言之
【提分句式】Although I got paint all over my clothes and hands, I felt happy. (although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、志愿服務(wù)
9.【答案】例文
Saturday, March 15th????Sunny
Today, our English teacher led us to do voluntary work at the children’s hospital. We helped cheer up the sick kids. We told them funny stories and played games with them. Some of us sang songs for them, and others read books to them. We also made some beautiful cards to give them hope.
I’m glad to see the smiles on their faces. It made me feel so warm inside. Through this activity, I realized how much a small act of kindness can mean to others. I hope we can do more things like this to bring joy to those in need.
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇英文日記;
②時(shí)態(tài):“一般過去時(shí)”為主;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中的信息提示,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,表明日記時(shí)間、天氣及參與志愿活動(dòng)的主要人物;
第二步,具體闡述在兒童醫(yī)院做了哪些志愿活動(dòng);
第三步,表達(dá)感受,書寫結(jié)語。
【提分詞匯】①lead sb to do 引領(lǐng)某人做某事
②cheer up 為……加油
③in need 有需要
【提分句式】①Through this activity, I realized how much a small act of kindness can mean to others. (how much引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
②I hope we can do more things like this to bring joy to those in need. (that省略的賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、信息技術(shù)
10.【答案】例文:
Dear fellow students,
At present, some students have tried using AI tools in their studies. In my opinion, AI can be a helpful partner in our learning if used properly.
We should use AI to solve difficult problems, like explaining grammar rules or analyzing math errors. It can also provide extra practice materials to help us review. But we must remember not to rely on it completely. We should think independently first before turning to AI for help.
I hope all of us can learn to use AI wisely. Let’s make it a tool to improve our study efficiency and become masters of our own learning.
Thank you for listening.
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇講稿。
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。
③提示:考生需按照邏輯順序組織內(nèi)容,確保要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充個(gè)人見解。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,表明寫作意圖。開篇引出對(duì)AI在學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)用的看法。
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。闡述AI的積極作用并提出使用AI的注意事項(xiàng)。
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)希望同學(xué)們能明智使用AI,提升學(xué)習(xí)效率,成為自己學(xué)習(xí)的主人。
【提分詞匯】①properly適當(dāng)?shù)?②independently獨(dú)立地
③wisely明智地
④efficiency效率
【提分句式】①In my opinion, AI can be a helpful partner in our learning if used properly. (if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)
②We should think independently first before turning to AI for help. (before引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、衛(wèi)生與健康、方法/建議
11.【答案】范文:
??Dear Tom,
??I’m sorry to know that you have a bad cold. To stay healthy, I’d like to give you some advice.??First, you should eat more vegetables and drink a glass of milk every day. They are good for your body. In addition, it’s a good idea to go for a walk or play sports after class. Doing exercise often can make you stronger. What’s more, try to sleep early and get enough rest. A good rest helps you feel better.
??I hope you get better soon and stay healthy!
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇電子郵件,屬于健康建議類寫作;
②時(shí)態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,結(jié)合情態(tài)動(dòng)詞表達(dá)建議;
③提示:審題要明確健康建議的三方面:飲食、運(yùn)動(dòng)和生活習(xí)慣,注意語氣要委婉有禮。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】 第一步:開頭回應(yīng)Tom的情況,表達(dá)關(guān)心;
第二步:分別從飲食、鍛煉、生活習(xí)慣等方面給出三條具體建議;
第三步:表達(dá)祝愿與鼓勵(lì),結(jié)尾呼應(yīng)。
【提分詞匯】 ① have a cold 感冒
② stay healthy 保持健康
③ in addition 另外
④ go for a walk 散步
⑤ do exercise 鍛煉身體
【提分句式】 ① It’s also a good idea to go for a walk or play sports after class.(It作形式主語結(jié)構(gòu))
② What’s more, try to sleep early and have enough rest.(祈使句)
③ I hope you get better soon and stay healthy.(賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、方法/建議、愛好
12.【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to receive your e-mail. I understand your love for basketball, and I think having a hobby is very important because it helps us relax and stay healthy. You should also be able to make your own decisions about how to spend your free time.
Here’s my advice: First, communicate with your parents and explain why basketball means so much to you. Second, try to balance your hobby and schoolwork. Maybe you can set a schedule to practice basketball after finishing homework. Finally, promise to study harder in your subjects to show your parents you can manage both.
Hope things work out and everything will be better!
Yours,
Liu Yu
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為郵件;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,回應(yīng)郵件并表達(dá)理解(興趣愛好重要性);
第二步,提出觀點(diǎn)(自主權(quán));
第三步,分條建議(溝通、平衡、承諾);
第四步,結(jié)尾祝福。
【提分詞匯】①help sb. do sth.幫助某人做某事
②set a schedule制定時(shí)間表
③promise to do sth.承諾做某事
【提分句式】①…I think having a hobby is very important because it helps us relax and stay healthy.(賓語從句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句)
②…communicate with your parents and explain why basketball means so much to you.(祈使句;why引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、書面表達(dá)、哲理感悟、旅行
13.【答案】例文:
Travelling is a good way for us to enjoy nature and learn about culture. I once had a nice trip. Last year, I went on a trip to the Silk Road with my family. We went there by train and played happily on the train. The first day, we visited the walled city—Xi’an. We saw the Terracotta Warriors. Amazing! The second day, we went to Lanzhou. We enjoyed the delicious food and watched the mother river, the Yellow River. I felt proud. We also visited other places of interest. It was a lot of fun.
I learned a lot from this trip. I will never forget it.
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”為主;
③提示:寫作的內(nèi)容提示已給出,考生應(yīng)按要求進(jìn)行寫作,注意不要遺漏任何信息要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,開篇點(diǎn)題,借用俗語來引出主題;
第二步,具體講述自己的旅游經(jīng)歷,包括旅游地點(diǎn)、在那里所做的事情以及感受;
第三步,總結(jié)并表達(dá)自己對(duì)旅游的看法。
【提分詞匯】①go on a trip to 去……旅行
②by train乘火車
③places of interest名勝古跡
【提分句式】We went there by train and played happily on the train. (and連接并列成分)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、中華文化、書面表達(dá)
14.【答案】例文:
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Now I want to tell you something about our school art fair themed “Love Chinese Culture, Understand Chinese Red”. It was held on last Friday, from 2:00 to 5:00 pm in our school art museum.
First, we admired some nice art works like paper cuttings and red packets, and felt the charm of traditional culture. Then, we learned the long history of these art forms, which helped us understand more. Also, we took part in lantern making activity and made red lanterns by ourselves. Besides, we learned to write “Fu” with brushes on red paper and felt the beauty of Chinese characters.
Through this fair, I felt proud of our rich traditional culture and wanted to learn more. It was really a meaningful experience!
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一封書信作文。
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過去時(shí)”。
③提示:根據(jù)提示寫作,不要遺漏信息,注意行文連貫,邏輯清晰,無拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,承接給出的開頭,介紹學(xué)校舉辦的藝術(shù)展及其時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
第二步,具體介紹藝術(shù)展的活動(dòng);
第三步,介紹我的感受。
【提分詞匯】①feel the charm of 感受……的魅力
②the beauty of Chinese characters 漢字的美
③rich traditional culture 豐富的傳統(tǒng)文化
④feel proud of 為……感到驕傲
【提分句式】Then, we learned the long history of these art forms, which helped us understand more. (定語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】家庭、朋友與周圍的人、現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、節(jié)假日活動(dòng)、節(jié)日
15.【答案】Dear Jill,
It's the New Year's Eve.Everyone in my family is busy.My grandmother and my mother are making dumplings.My grandfather is watching television.My father is taking photos.He wants to send them to his friends in America.My brother is calling his Chinese friends.We are so happy now.Happy New Year!
Love,
Kevin
【分析】
本文為一篇電子郵件,主要向美國(guó)朋友講述你和你的家人們?cè)诖汗?jié)里做些什么?
【詳解】
能夠根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。注意時(shí)態(tài)和人稱的變化。
【點(diǎn)睛】
He wants to send them to his friends in America.他想把它們寄給他美國(guó)的朋友.
want to do sth想做某事.
〖高分句型二〗
My brother is calling his Chinese friends. 弟弟在給他中國(guó)的朋友打電話。
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)be+doing,表示動(dòng)作正在進(jìn)行;call sb給某人打電話
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、文化、節(jié)日
16.【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.The Dragon Boat Festival ,also???called the Duanwu Festival,is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calender.People always eat???rice dumplings and watch dragon boat races to celebrate it.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.It’s very popular.
The rice dumpling is made of rice,meat and so on.You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.They are very delicious .And Dragon Boat Festival is for Qu Yuan.He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.
Overall,the???Dragon Boat Festival is very interesting!
What do you think of the Dragon Boat Festival?Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Wei
【詳解】
亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如be glad to,the Dragon Boat Festival,according to,the Chinese calender,dragon boat races,in the southern places,be made of,and so on,different kinds of,in the river,looking forward to等。而The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races,especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes./ He is an honest minister who is said to have drown himself in the river.等定語從句的運(yùn)用,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使語言表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。
點(diǎn)睛:書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、中華傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、書面表達(dá)
17.【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
I’m very glad to get your email. This Dragon Boat Festival was great. My family and I celebrated it together. We watched exciting dragon boat races in the morning. In the afternoon, my mom taught me to make zongzi, which are sticky rice dumplings with delicious fillings. We ate a lot of zongzi, eggs and other traditional food for dinner. It was a happy day.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Tao
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一封郵件回復(fù);
②時(shí)態(tài):主要為“一般過去時(shí)”;
③提示:需介紹端午節(jié)慶祝方式、所做事情及所吃食物等,可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】 第一步,表達(dá)收到郵件的喜悅,并總體評(píng)價(jià)今年的端午節(jié);
第二步,詳細(xì)描述和家人一起慶祝端午節(jié)的活動(dòng)以及晚餐吃的食物;
第三步,總結(jié)這是愉快的一天,呼應(yīng)開頭的積極感受。
【提分詞匯】 ①celebrated慶祝
②dragon boat races龍舟比賽
③traditional food傳統(tǒng)食物
【提分句式】 ①In the afternoon, my mom taught me to make zongzi, which are sticky rice dumplings with delicious fillings. (which引導(dǎo)定語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、學(xué)校活動(dòng)、景點(diǎn)/建筑
18.【答案】Friday, 30 May
Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. It was fantastic! We saw many interesting things. First, we explored the space hall and saw a model of the space station. Then we went to the robot hall. There were all kinds of robots. Some could play chess and others could dance. I was amazed. We also did a fun experiment. It was a great day!
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇日記;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”為主;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行書面表達(dá),不要遺漏要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。應(yīng)能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等,清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想,進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,表明寫作意圖,引出話題;
第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體介紹這次學(xué)校旅行的情況。
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己的收獲和感悟。
【提分詞匯】①go on a trip去旅行
②be fantastic太棒了
③all kinds of各種各樣的
④play chess下棋
【提分句式】①Today, we were glad to go on a school trip to the science museum. (be glad to do sth結(jié)構(gòu))
②Some could play chess and others could dance. (并列句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、個(gè)人情況、書面表達(dá)、情感與情緒、方法/建議
19.【答案】例文:
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear about your trouble.
You said you don’t have close friends. Why not join more activities? It’s easier to make friends when you share hobbies with others. Also, try talking more with classmates—smiles and small talks can build good relationships.
Feeling lonely and not wanting to talk to parents is common, but they care about you. Treat them as friends, share your feelings, and you’ll find they’re willing to help solve problems together. Maybe you can also take up a hobby like reading or sports to enrich your life.
I really hope my advice will help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇書信作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主;
③提示:材料表格所給內(nèi)容需完整表達(dá),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,針對(duì)王明沒有朋友給出建議;
第二步,圍繞王明感到孤獨(dú),不愿和父母交流的情況提出建議;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。
【提分詞匯】①talk with sb.與某人談話
②care about關(guān)心
③be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
【提分句式】①It’s easier to make friends when you share hobbies with others. (時(shí)間狀語從句)
②I really hope my advice will help you.(賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、情感與情緒、方法/建議
20.【答案】例文:
Dear Xiaodong,
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days. You say you have too much homework every day and have little time to rest. Every subject becomes more difficult and you will take the entrance examination for high school in biology and geography, so you feel stressed and nervous. Now let me give you some advice.
First, you should make a proper plan for your study and try to find your own ways of studying. Second, make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax, such as listening to light music, going for a walk and doing sports. Third, why not communicate more with your parents, teachers or friends when you feel nervous? Maybe they can help you with your studies and make you feel better.
Hope things work out.
Yours,
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
①體裁:本文是一封電子郵件;
②時(shí)態(tài):以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干給出的要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),靈活運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫?,使行文流暢自然?[寫作步驟]
第一步,表明寫作背景和目的,介紹朋友生活中遇到的問題,并提出會(huì)給予建議;
第二步,詳細(xì)介紹給予的建議;
第三步,書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①feel stressed and nervous 感到壓力大、緊張
②make a proper plan for study 制定合理的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃
③make the best use of one’s time 充分利用某人的時(shí)間
④communicate with 與……溝通
[高分句型]
①Second, make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax, such as listening to light music, going for a walk and doing sports. (祈使句)
②Third, why not communicate more with your parents, teachers or friends when you feel nervous? (why not句型表示提議;when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、學(xué)校活動(dòng)、景點(diǎn)/建筑
21.【答案】例文:
Thursday, 12 June
Today was a day to remember! It was cloudy and cool. My classmates and I went to Linfen Museum for our trip. The museum was big and quiet. When we got there, we saw many old things. The guide said they were “cultural relics”. Some were cups, and some were tools. They looked very interesting! The guide told us stories about them. We listened carefully and learned a lot about the history of our city. After that, we walked around the museum and talked about what we saw. It was fun to be with my friends, we also took lots of photos.
What a meaningful and happy trip!
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇日記。
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”。
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意要點(diǎn)齊全,可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,開篇點(diǎn)題。開篇交代天氣情況和核心事件。
第二步,具體描述參觀過程。依次講述到達(dá)博物館后的見聞、導(dǎo)游的講解、自身的收獲,以及和朋友的互動(dòng),讓經(jīng)歷更生動(dòng)具體。
第三步,總結(jié)感受。抒發(fā)對(duì)此次參觀的愉悅之情,升華情感。
【提分詞匯】①cultural relics文物
②learned a lot學(xué)到很多
③fun有趣的
【提分句式】①When we got there, we saw many old things. (When引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、健身/鍛煉、愛好、音樂與舞蹈
22.【答案】例文
Dear Wang Lei,
I am sorry to hear that you have problems recently. I will give you some advice.
You should have a talk with your parents so that they can understand you better. Your parents may think playing the piano can prepare yourself for your future. But if your parents force you to learn it, you may feel unhappy. Playing football can make you feel relaxed, but it may take you a long time and it may get in the way of your study. What’s more, you shouldn’t avoid the problem, but you shouldn’t be too worried. You should look for some solutions.
Hope you can solve your problem soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一封電子郵件;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);
③提示:根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容給王磊一些建議,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,引出話題;
第二步,根據(jù)他的問題詳細(xì)介紹給王磊的一些建議;
第三步,表達(dá)希望。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a talk with和某人聊一聊
②get in the way of阻礙
③look for尋找
[高分句型]
①You should have a talk with your parents so that they can understand you better. (so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句)
②But if your parents force you to learn it, you may feel unhappy. (if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般過去時(shí)、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、書面表達(dá)、旅行
23.【答案】例文:
Dear Jack,
????I’m glad to get your email. I’d like to share my favourite trip with you.
????Last summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. Sanya is a beautiful coastal city in southern China. We visited several places of interest, like the famous Yalong Bay. The clear blue sea and soft white sand there were amazing. We spent hours swimming in the sea and building sandcastles on the beach. Also, we went to Nanshan Temple and were deeply impressed by the huge statue of the Goddess of Mercy.?
????Besides, we took a lot of photos of the beautiful scenery there. And the local food was a highlight! We ate fresh and delicious seafood at a local market. I’ve never had such delicious seafood before.
????This trip to Sanya was truly unforgettable, and I hope I can visit it again someday. How about sharing one of your interesting trips with me?
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,
Li Hua??
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一封郵件;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)態(tài)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出,考生注意寫清楚旅途的具體經(jīng)歷,注意寫信正確格式,適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,指出分享旅行經(jīng)歷的寫信目的;
第二步,具體介紹旅途的經(jīng)歷;
第三步,表達(dá)對(duì)本次旅途的喜愛和對(duì)杰克旅途分享的期待。
【提分詞匯】① amazing 令人驚嘆的
② impressed 印象深刻的
③ scenery 風(fēng)景
④ unforgettable 難以忘記的??
【提分句式】① Also, we went to Nanshan Temple and were deeply impressed by the huge statue of the Goddess of Mercy.? (and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu))
② I’ve never had such delicious seafood before. (現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài))
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、人際交往、方法與哲理
24.【答案】例文:
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. Those who can cooperate with others well are called great partners, so the question remains: how can we be a great partner??
There are certain techniques we can learn to help to be better. First of all, we should always listen to others patiently and carefully. Only by listening can we understand our team members and be more effective. In the meantime, we should always be polite when we give advice. That’s how we show respect and it’s the only way we can make progress.
By cooperating with other people, we can improve our communication skills. By cooperating with other people, we can learn about new perspectives towards things. By cooperating with other people, we can make progress in both the project and self-improvement.
Thank you for your listening.
【詳解】1.題干解讀:該書面表達(dá)主要圍繞如何成為一名優(yōu)秀的合作伙伴寫一篇英語演講稿。本文已經(jīng)給出了寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。作文的開頭已給出,寫作中,應(yīng)承接短文的開頭,注意描述的全面性,將提示的內(nèi)容全部利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng):本文采用四段式,第一段開篇引出如何成為優(yōu)秀的合作者;第二段是合作的技巧;第三段是合作的意義;第四段以感謝結(jié)尾。整篇例文要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整,條例清晰。多種句式交替使用,使文章增色不少。
3.高分亮點(diǎn):
短語:as we all know;be of great importance;cooperate with;first of all;listen to sb.;in the meantime;make progress;learn about;both…and…;thank sb. for sth.。
句型:as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句;who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句;how特殊疑問句;that(可省略)引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句;only位于句首的倒裝句;when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句;By cooperating with other people…排比句。
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、人際交往、家庭、朋友與周圍的人
25.【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
Just as an English saying goes, no man is an island. Everyone needs friends. I have a lot of friends. But my best friend is Amy. We are in the same class. She is as tall as me. Her hair is longer than mine. She is outgoing and funny but I am quiet. When I am sad, she often makes me laugh. We have the same interest. We both like reading books. She likes novels and I like stories. We often talk about our books with each other. Her English is good but I am poor. When I have problems, she always helps me. She tells me some good leaning methods. Without her help, my English won’t improve so much. I treasure our friendship very much. I think it is the most precious thing in my life. I must take good care of the boat of our friendship.
Thank you for your time.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材:本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,為發(fā)言稿;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:要求以“friendship”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。學(xué)生可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致,注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。
[寫作步驟]
第一步,介紹你的好朋友的基本信息、性格、外貌等;
第二步,具體講述你們之間發(fā)生的事情;
第三步,談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①make sb do sth讓某人做某事
②talk about談?wù)?③take good care of愛護(hù)
[高分句型]
①When I am sad, she often makes me laugh.(時(shí)間狀語從句)
②When I have problems, she always helps me.(時(shí)間狀語從句)
③I think it is the most precious thing in my life.(賓語從句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、個(gè)人經(jīng)歷、書面表達(dá)、哲理感悟、情感與情緒、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)
26.【答案】例文
Dear teachers and students,
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will come to an end soon. I’d like to say something.
Looking back at the last three years’ middle school life, I’m proud to say that I’ve gained a lot—not only have I gained a lot of knowledge, but also I’ve made many friends and learned how to get along with others. What’s more, I’ve learned to make my own decisions.
Here, I’d like to express my thanks to those teachers who have been kind and friendly to us. It’s they who have taught us to share. It’s they who have always been there to listen to us and give us a hand.
Tomorrow we’ll leave here for the new school. We promise to go on working hard and try our best to make greater progress in the new school.
Finally, I wish all of you the best of luck.
Thank you.
Li Hua
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇演講稿;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”、“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,開篇點(diǎn)題,引出本文主題;
第二步,回顧初中三年的學(xué)校生活;
第三步,向老師表示感謝;
第四步,展望未來并表達(dá)祝愿。
【提分詞匯】①not only…but also…不僅……而且……
②get along with與……和睦相處
③make my own decisions自己做決定
【提分句式】①Here, I’d like to express my thanks to those teachers who have been kind and friendly to us.(who引導(dǎo)定語從句)
②It’s they who have taught us to share.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)
三、人與自然
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、瀕危動(dòng)物
27.【答案】參考范文
Boys and girls,
Snow leopards are our friends, but how much do you know about them? Snow leopards live in the mountains of Central and South Asia and feed on sheep, rabbits, and other small animals. Unfortunately, they are in danger. People hunt them for their fur, cut down forests, and leave them with no place to live. We should do something to protect them. First, we can help people learn more about snow leopards. Second, we can set up more nature parks.
Let’s do something to make a difference!
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”;
③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】 第一步,開頭引出雪豹這一主題;
第二步,中間闡述雪豹的生活習(xí)性、面臨的危險(xiǎn);
第三步,結(jié)尾提出保護(hù)雪豹的具體措施。
【提分詞匯】 ①unfortunately不幸地
②hunt捕獵
③ensure確保
④set up建立
【提分句式】 Let’s do something to make a difference! (祈使句)
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、書面表達(dá)、動(dòng)物
28.【答案】例文
My Favorite Animal
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua, and I want to talk about my favorite animal. My favorite animal is my dog, Coco. She has big eyes and soft fur. She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me. Also, Coco brings me lots of happiness. When I feel sad, she sits beside me quietly. Every weekend, we play together in the park. I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.
Animals are our best friends. They make our lives colorful. So let’s protect them and give them warm homes. Thank you!
【詳解】【要點(diǎn)分析】
①題材:本文是一篇演講稿;
②時(shí)態(tài):本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主;
③提示:應(yīng)注意題干給出的要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
【脈絡(luò)導(dǎo)引】第一步,借用文章已給開頭,介紹自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物;
第二步,根據(jù)題干的要點(diǎn),介紹它的性格,外貌,以及與它之間的相處經(jīng)歷;
第三步,呼吁人類保護(hù)動(dòng)物。
【提分詞匯】①lots of很多
②in the park在公園
【提分句式】①She is friendly and always wags her tail when she sees me.(時(shí)間狀語從句)
②I throw a ball, and she runs to catch it quickly.(and連接并列句)
四、請(qǐng)求與提供幫助
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、所屬、社會(huì)、請(qǐng)求與提供幫助
29.【答案】例文:
I lost my schoolbag. Do you see a schoolbag on the bench in the park? Maybe it's mine. I'm sorry to leave it there. There is a Chinese book, a maths book, an English book and some exercise books in it. There's also a pencil box and a student card. There is more information about my name, my class and my school on the student card. Please call me at 8214-6547. It's very nice of you to do so.
Thank you!
【詳解】
1、題干解讀:本文是一篇材料作文,要求按照所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇尋物啟事,重點(diǎn)介紹書包中的物品以及學(xué)生卡上的個(gè)人信息。
2、寫作指導(dǎo):本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),第一人稱為主,注意主謂一致問題;寫作時(shí)注意人稱代詞和物主代詞的正確使用;可使用there be句型介紹書包中的內(nèi)容。
五、希望和愿望
【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】一般將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、希望和愿望、意愿和打算、計(jì)劃與安排
30.【答案】例文:
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school. I'm so happy because I will meet new classmates and teachers. I'll also be allowed to make more decisions by myself and choose my favorite subjects. Besides, I expect there is a library where I can read.
However, I also have some worries. First, I'm afraid I'll have no time for after-school activities. Second, perhaps I'll fall behind others in some subjects. It's always difficult to study maths well. At last, I'm afraid the food in the new school won't agree with me. What can I do with these problems?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】
1. 題干解讀:本題屬于書信作文,題目的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求根據(jù)參考詞匯寫給筆友Linda寫一封電子郵件,談?wù)勀銓?duì)高中生活的向往和擔(dān)憂。寫作時(shí)要緊扣材料內(nèi)容并進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。適當(dāng)使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點(diǎn)。寫好時(shí),再閱讀一遍,減少語法錯(cuò)誤,不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯(cuò)誤。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng):這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的例文。例文緊扣題目要求,用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)分段談了自己對(duì)高中生活的向往和擔(dān)憂,運(yùn)用了題干中所給的參考詞匯,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。例文簡(jiǎn)明扼要,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語言表達(dá)到位。
3. 高分亮點(diǎn):
單詞和短語:be allowed to do sth.;make decisions;besides;however;after-school activities;perhaps;fall behind;at last;agree with;do with;look forward to。
句型:特殊疑問句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句;賓語從句;there be句型;where引導(dǎo)的定語從句;it固定句型。
a)Who are you? How old are you?
b)What do you usually do after school?
c)Which club would you like to join? Why?
d)What can you get from it?Dear Li Hua,
Long time no see! I went on a school trip last weekend. It was a sunny day and I went to a farm with my classmates. I picked apples and had fun there. Did you go anywhere interesting? Could you share your school trip with me? Where did you go? How was the weather on that day? What did you do? How did you feel? And what did you learn?
Looking forward to your reply.
Peter寫作要點(diǎn)參考句型1)Who did the voluntary work?We helped...
We also did...
I’m glad to...2)What did you do?3)How did you feel?Foodeat more vegetables, drink a glass of milk, …Exercisego for a walk, play sports, ...……Opinions:●importance of having a hobby, such as...;
●be able to make your own decisions (決定);
●…Advice:●communicate with your parents;
●balance (平衡) your hobby and schoolwork;
●promise to study harder in your subjects;
●…Dear Li Tao,
It was Dragon Boat Festival a few days ago. How did you and your family celebrate it this year? What did you do? What did you eat? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Steve困擾1、沒有要好的朋友;
2、有孤獨(dú)感,不愿和父母交流;
3、……你的建議1、多參加活動(dòng);
2、多與同學(xué)交流;
3、把父母當(dāng)朋友,多溝通,有問題共同解決;
4、……問題? 家庭作業(yè)多,幾乎沒有時(shí)間休息;
? 各科難度加大,并將參加生物和地理兩門學(xué)科畢業(yè)會(huì)考(take the entrance examination for high school in biology and geography),感覺壓力很大,經(jīng)常感到緊張。建議? 制定合理的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃,找到好的學(xué)習(xí)方法;
? 學(xué)會(huì)放松;
? 多與父母、老師或朋友交流;
? ……天氣多云并且涼爽地點(diǎn)臨汾博物館活動(dòng)1、看見了很多古老的文物2、拍了很多照片3、了解了許多歷史故事...感受有意義并且很開心...畢業(yè)典禮上的講話回顧初中三年的學(xué)校生活:
◆學(xué)到許多知識(shí);
◆交到許多朋友;
……感謝老師:
◆老師教會(huì)我們知識(shí)
◆幫助我們解決問題
……展望未來:今后的打算Habitatthe mountains of Central and South AsiaFoodsheep, rabbits, other small animalsReasonshunt for fur (皮毛); cut down treesActionshelp learn about them; set up national parksExpectation(向往)meet new classmates and teachers
make decisions by myself
choose favorite subjects
…Worryhave no time
after-school activities
fall behind
be difficult to study
…
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