專題16 讀后續(xù)寫作基本技法-【精講精練】2025年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)應(yīng)用文寫作與讀后續(xù)寫

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(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE　　The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
　　The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
　　Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear! The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右。 As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1:厘清主題，把握走向
Step 2:尋找主線，深挖要點(diǎn)
Step 3:精研首句，起承轉(zhuǎn)合 根據(jù)所給續(xù)文段落首句產(chǎn)生問(wèn)題鏈接,形成續(xù)寫思路,采用G-N(Given-New)和Q-A(Questin-Answer)策略,做好起承轉(zhuǎn)合,創(chuàng)造新的情節(jié)。Paragraph 1: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.Q1: What was Father’s first instinct when faced with the mess?Q2: Hw did the twins explain their plan t their father?Q3: What did Father d t help the twins t make delicius French tast and chicken prridge?
Paragraph 2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.Q1: What was Mther’s first instinct when the twins wke her up?Q2: Wuld the twins give Mther a big surprise? Hw did they express their best wishes t Mther?Q3: Hw did Mther feel? Hw can yu design the ending mre appealing and meaningful?
Step 4:吃透語(yǔ)言，風(fēng)格一致 為了使所寫的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言和原文保持連貫性和一致性,讀后續(xù)寫需要通過(guò)在理解原文的基礎(chǔ)上,巧妙利用 “拉平效應(yīng)”,創(chuàng)造性地模仿和使用語(yǔ)言,即繼承原文語(yǔ)言表達(dá)方面的顯著特征,包括寫作手法及語(yǔ)言表達(dá)技巧,從而一方面保證寫作的效率和流暢度,另一方面保證寫作在各個(gè)語(yǔ)言層次和表達(dá)風(fēng)格上和原文保持一致。
通過(guò)分析語(yǔ)篇,可以從五個(gè)方面理解原文的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用技巧:1.場(chǎng)景描寫(Surrundings)場(chǎng)景描寫指的是描寫人、物、事發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、自然環(huán)境及社會(huì)場(chǎng)景等。場(chǎng)景描寫可以充當(dāng)背景信息,提供人、物、事發(fā)生的具體設(shè)定。其次,場(chǎng)景描寫可以表達(dá)角色的感情、情緒,可以隨著情節(jié)的發(fā)展有所變化,甚至可以提示、推動(dòng)情節(jié)的發(fā)展,增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)篇的代入感。2.動(dòng)作描寫(Actins)動(dòng)作描寫指的是描寫人物在具體情況下的行為舉止,是情節(jié)發(fā)展的具體體現(xiàn)。恰到好處的動(dòng)作描寫不僅可以塑造生動(dòng)形象的人物,還可以反映人物的情感態(tài)度及心理變化,并最終反映人物的性格特點(diǎn)及思想品質(zhì)。
3.心理描寫(Feelings)心理描寫指的是描寫人物在具體情況下的看法、感受、情感及心理活動(dòng),并由此反映人物的性格特點(diǎn)及思想品質(zhì)。心理描寫除了對(duì)心理的直接描寫,還可以結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫及場(chǎng)景描寫,共同構(gòu)成有意義、緊湊的語(yǔ)篇。4.有效對(duì)話(Effective Dialgues)有效對(duì)話是記敘語(yǔ)篇中塑造人物的一個(gè)重要手段。對(duì)話的有效性首先體現(xiàn)在符合人物設(shè)定,這樣不僅能夠有效地推動(dòng)情節(jié)的發(fā)展,更能夠增加記敘的生動(dòng)性。此外,對(duì)話語(yǔ)言也要符合記敘語(yǔ)篇的語(yǔ)言特點(diǎn),即生活化、簡(jiǎn)化及去書(shū)面化。5.修辭(Figures f speech)修辭是增加語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)性的最佳手段。它可以引起共鳴,使抽象的情境具體化。常見(jiàn)的可以應(yīng)用的修辭有比喻、擬人、夸張和排比等。
考場(chǎng)滿分作文1: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.①Father’s appearing was like a savir t the tw children.②Under the guidance f their father, they tk psitive actin and started all ver again.They made the bread and then went n cking prridge.Father helped them adjust the fire, ③which was the key t success.It was all right this time.Delicius breakfast was ready.④Hw happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.⑤When their mther saw the delicius and perfect breakfast in frnt f her, she was very surprised. ⑥It was nt nly the gift, but the lve f the children fr her that mved her very much.The tw children culd finish cking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect.The children said ludly, ⑦“Happy Mther’s Day! ” ⑧Mther hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
評(píng)卷老師點(diǎn)評(píng):①過(guò)渡自然流暢。②時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)境和前文相互照應(yīng)。③使用高分句式。④使用高分句式。⑤使用高分句式。⑥使用并列結(jié)構(gòu)。⑦使用直接引語(yǔ),生動(dòng)真實(shí)。⑧動(dòng)作及情感表達(dá)真實(shí)細(xì)膩。
考場(chǎng)滿分作文2: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.Faced with the mess the twins had made f the kitchen, Father felt annyed but tried t cntain himself.Jenna ran up t him, whispering “ just want t make breakfast fr Mm as Mther’s Day gift.” After he learned what all was abut, his annyance gave way t relief and delight.Immediately, he jined them and they started all ver again.Sn the French tast and chicken prridge were ready. The kitchen filled with the scent f breakfast and sweetness f a family.Lking at the wrk, the three exchanged an understanding smile.After signaling them t keep it a secret, Father slipped int the bedrm, pretending t knw nthing abut it.
　　The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.Still a little sleepy, Mther failed t figure ut what they were up t.“Happy Mther’s Day!” The twins cngratulated.“We made breakfast fr yu as yu d that fr us.Mm, we lve yu!” Thugh still in her pajamas, Mther tk a bite f the tast and sipped the ht prridge.Lst in the delicius breakfast and pure lve frm her twins, she sbbed, with delightful tears streaming dwn her face.Lvingly, she pressed tw gentle kisses n their freheads, prudly enjying their best wishes.Their father was standing in the drway, recrding this tuching scene.The whle rm was bathed in a happy Mther’s Day atmsphere.
評(píng)卷老師點(diǎn)評(píng): 文章用詞精準(zhǔn)(whisper, understanding, signal, pretend, lst in, stream dwn, prudly等),句式高級(jí)(非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、獨(dú)立主格和介詞with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)等),通過(guò)動(dòng)作、對(duì)話和心理活動(dòng)等描寫,生動(dòng)、形象地呈現(xiàn)了雙胞胎孩子在母親節(jié)為媽媽做早餐,獻(xiàn)上一份特別的節(jié)日禮物和驚喜。
考場(chǎng)滿分作文3: As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.Seeing the mess,Father frze with shck, as if rted n the grund. Frm the black bread and the spilled prridge, he suddenly figured ut their secret.A smile f understanding flashed acrss his face.He realized their intentin.He jined them in preparing the Mther’s Day surprise immediately.They started all ver again.Everything went smthly.The chicken and rice were dancing harmniusly in the biling water pt and bread slices were shwing ff its mst tremendus glden clr. Sn the French tast and chicken prridge were ready. The kitchen filled with the scent f breakfast and sweetness f a family.Despite the il stains n the twins’ aprns, nthing seemed imperfect, and all was in place except the mst imprtant ne.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.Still a little sleepy, Mther failed t figure ut what they were up t, but the cheerful “Happy Mther’s Day” frm the tw sweeties brught her back t reality.The breakfast with lve made by her twins really struck her heartstrings.Mther kissed them and gave them each a bear hug, saying “Oh dear, thank yu my sweeties.What a big surprise!” The next mment, she wke up Father, eager t share the blessing and the inviting breakfast seasned with lve.Father, wh had been awake, cperatively rubbed his eyes and tk a big bite, winking at the twins secretly.After all, the surprise did make a sweet surprise!