(新高考)高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)課件選擇性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing (含詳解)

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主題語境：人與社會(社會責(zé)任與志愿服務(wù))【話題詞匯】1.pverty n. 貧窮2.harmny n. 和睦，和諧3.srrw n. 痛苦4.cnscience n. 良心；良知5.charity n. 慈善團體6.respnsibility n. 責(zé)任，負(fù)責(zé) 7.welfare n. 幸福；福利8.prmte vt. 促進；提升9.assist vt. 幫助；協(xié)助10.unite v. 聯(lián)合，團結(jié)
11.share vt. 分享，共同使用12.cperate vi. 合作13.respect vt.&n. 尊重14.establish vt. 建立；確立；確定15.undertake vt. 承擔(dān)；從事16.guarantee n．&vt. 保證；擔(dān)保17.rewarding adj. 有回報的18.cnsiderate adj. 考慮周到的19.peace-lving adj. 愛好和平的20.harmnius adj. 和諧的21.warm-hearted adj. 熱心腸的
【話題短語】 把……奉獻給……2.in memry f... 為了紀(jì)念……3.n behalf f 代表4.in the lng run 從長遠(yuǎn)來看5.fr the benefit f... 為了……的利益6.be n gd terms with sb. 與某人關(guān)系好7.cme t ne's help 來幫助某人8.be ready t help thers 樂于助人9.devte a bit f ne's time t... 為……抽出一點時間10.shw kindness 表達善意11.live up t sb.'s expectatins 不辜負(fù)某人的期望12.a great sense f accmplishment 極大的成就感
【話題佳句】1.Hard as it is, I find the jb fun and rewarding. I'll keep ging, fr I believe being a teacher is a jb I'll enjy fr the rest f my life.盡管很辛苦，我認(rèn)為這個工作是有趣而值得的。我要繼續(xù)前進，因為我相信當(dāng)老師是我余生喜歡的工作。2.As far as I'm cncerned, my mther is always helping ur neighburs r strangers, which makes her gain gd hnrs in ur village.就我而言，我的母親總是幫助我們的鄰居或陌生人，這使她在我們的村子里獲得了良好的聲譽。
【話題練習(xí)】1.It is recgnized by the internatinal ecnmic cmmunity that China will play an essential part in the internatinal market.全球經(jīng)濟界都認(rèn)同，中國將在國際市場中扮演重要角色。2.Thrugh prmting the sharing f educatinal resurces, the Internet can level the playing field fr students frm different backgrunds.通過促進教育資源共享，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)可以為不同背景的學(xué)生創(chuàng)造公平的競爭環(huán)境。
Ⅰ.重點單詞1．________ n. 包裹vt. 打包；裹好2．________ n. 果醬；堵塞3．________ n. 郵件；信件vt. 郵寄；發(fā)電郵給4．________ n. 草；雜草5．________ n. 合唱曲；合唱團6．________ n. 制服；校服adj. 統(tǒng)一的7．________ n. 平板電腦；便箋本；藥片8．________ n. 橡皮；黑板擦；橡膠9．________ n. 洗手間
10．________ adj. 固執(zhí)的；死板的11．________ n. 管子；管狀物12．________ n. 陰涼處；陰影部分vt. 給……遮陰13．________ n. 下巴；頜14．________ n. 皺紋vi.&vt. 起皺紋；皺起15．________ n. 額頭16．________ n. 住房；住宅17．________ n. 平臺；月臺；舞臺18．________ n. 燒水壺；水壺19．________ n. 烤架；烤肉餐館vt. 烤；拷問
20．________ n. 特權(quán)；優(yōu)惠待遇21．________ n. 堵塞物；插頭；插座vt. 封堵；補足22．________ vt. 值得；應(yīng)得23．________ vt. 輸入n. 輸入；信息；投入24．________ vt. 同意；準(zhǔn)許n. 撥款25．________ n. 巡回；環(huán)形線路26．________ n. 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)；準(zhǔn)則；原則27．________ n. 接力賽vt. 轉(zhuǎn)發(fā)；轉(zhuǎn)播28．________ vi.&vt. 企盼；祈禱
Ⅱ.拓展單詞1．secnd num.第二； adj.第二的；次要的→ ________ adj.中學(xué)的；次要的→ ________ adv.第二；其次2．________ vi.&vt.擦灰； n．沙土；灰塵→ ________ adj.布滿灰塵的→ ________ adj.無塵的3．________ n．化學(xué)家；藥劑師；藥房→ ________ n．化學(xué)→ ________ adj.化學(xué)的；n.化學(xué)制品；化學(xué)藥品4．________ adj.熟的；時機成熟的→ ________ adv.圓通地；成熟地→ ________ vt.使……成熟→ ________ n．成熟；老練5．disable vt.使……失去能力；使殘廢→ ________ adj.殘疾的→ ________ n．殘疾
6．________ vi.&vt.辭職；辭去→ ________ adj.辭職的；放棄的→ ________ n．辭職7．late adj.晚的；遲到的；adv.晚；遲→lately n．最近；不久前→ ________ adv.后來；稍后→ ________ adj. 最近的；最新的8. ________ n．合同；契約；vt.感染；與……定契約→ ________ n．承包商→ ________ n．收縮；縮寫；害病9．________ vt.咨詢；請教；商量→ ________ n．咨詢；咨詢會→cnsultant n．咨詢師；顧問10．________ adj.穩(wěn)定的；牢固的→ ________ vt.使……穩(wěn)固，穩(wěn)定→ ________ n．穩(wěn)定性；穩(wěn)固性
聯(lián)想拓展--ant結(jié)尾的“人”①cnsultant 咨詢師；顧問 ②assistant 助手③accuntant 會計④immigrant 移民⑤servant 仆人⑥merchant 商人
fre--表示“在……之前”①frehead n. 額頭；前額②fresight n. 遠(yuǎn)見；深謀遠(yuǎn)慮③frecast n．&vt. 預(yù)報；預(yù)測④fresee vt. 預(yù)見；預(yù)知⑤fretell vt. 預(yù)言；預(yù)告⑥fremst adj. 最重要的；居于首位的
Ⅲ.核心短語1．________________ 齊聲；異口同聲2．________________ 更不用說；且不說3._________________ 認(rèn)為……理所應(yīng)當(dāng)4．________________ 但愿5．_________________________ 對……沒概念6．________________ 那一天7．________________ 老實說8．______________________ 對……有影響9．________________ 生火10．________________ 上下顛倒
nt t mentin
take fr granted
have n cncept f ding sth.
the ther day
make a difference t sth./sb.
build a fire
11．________________ 干透12．________________ 干涸；枯竭13．_________________ 需要……14．________________ 改變態(tài)度15．________________ 在……之前；居先16._________________ 渴望做某事17．________________ 值得做18．_________________ 應(yīng)該有平等的機會19．________________ 毫無疑問……20．________________ 防雨
be in need f sth.
sing a different tune
prir t sth.
be dying t d
be wrth ding
deserve a fair chance
there is n dubt that...　
keep the rain ut
聯(lián)想拓展帶有形式賓語“it”短語小結(jié)①take it fr granted that... 認(rèn)為……理所應(yīng)當(dāng)②rely n it that 指望；依靠③we it t sb. that 多虧了某人④see t it that 務(wù)必；保證⑤depend n it that 放心；指望⑥sth. has it that 據(jù)說 “t be＋adj.”結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語①t be sure 誠然，固然②t be fair 公平地說③t be exact 確切地說④t be brief 簡單地說⑤t be frank 坦率地說
Ⅳ.重點句型1．sb. be ding sth. when... 某人正在做某事突然……The ther day ____________ the bys the weekly chemistry experiment ________， befre I knew it, the mixture was bubbling ver everywhere!那一天，我正給孩子們做每周一次的化學(xué)實驗的演示，我還沒有明白怎么回事，混合劑就到處冒氣泡了！2．強調(diào)謂語結(jié)構(gòu)But last weekend anther teacher, Jenny, and I ________ a village which is the hme f ne f the bys, Tmbe.不過，上周末我和另外一位叫詹妮的教師真的去訪問了一個村莊，那是我的學(xué)生湯貝的家。
I was shwing
3．“介詞＋關(guān)系副詞”引導(dǎo)的定語從句We walked fr tw and a half hurs t get there— first up a muntain t a ridge ________ we had fantastic views and then dwn a steep path t the valley belw.我們步行了兩個半小時才到達那里——先是爬山，爬到山脊能看到奇妙的景色，然后下一個陡坡，一直走到下面的山谷。4．狀語從句的省略________， he placed them in an empty il drum with kau kau (sweet ptat), crn and greens.燃燒(石頭)之后，他把石頭放進一個空油桶里，加上一些考考(紅薯)、玉米和青菜。
高頻考點探究Ⅰ.核心詞匯1．privilege n．優(yōu)惠待遇；特權(quán)【典型例句】Access t educatin is an essential part f ne's privilege regardless f ne's gender, culture, and family backgrund.無論一個人的性別、文化和家庭背景如何，接受教育都是其特權(quán)不可缺少的一部分。(1)have the privilege t d/f ding sth.有做某事的特權(quán)(2)be privileged t d sth. 做某事是榮幸的(3) a privilege t d/f ding sth. 有幸做某事(4)it is ne's privilege/hnr t d sth. 對于某人而言做某事很榮幸(5)special privilege 特殊許可；特權(quán)
【練透考點】單句語法填空/完成句子①He's glad that he has the privilege ________ having the chance.②We are ________ (privilege) t have a distinguished guest with us tnight.③D yu think it ________ privilege t be chsen? ④As far as I'm cncerned, _____________________________________.(做志愿者工作幫助那些需要幫助的人很榮幸)
it is a privilege t d vluntary wrk t help thse in need
2．cnsultatin n．請教；咨詢；商量；討論會【教材原句】My mther als dse a circuit f the rural villages t prvide medical treatment, help thse with disability, and prvide cnsultatin and training fr lcal dctrs.我媽媽在一些鄉(xiāng)村里巡回出診，提供醫(yī)療救治，幫助殘疾人，還向當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)生提供咨詢和培訓(xùn)。 (1)prvide cnsultatin 提供咨詢服務(wù) hld a cnsultatin abut sth. 商討某事 in cnsultatin with 和……磋商nline cnsultatin 在線咨詢……(2)cnsult with sb. 與某人商量，與某人磋商cnsult sb. abut sth. 就某事請教/咨詢某人
【練透考點】單句語法填空①The tw cuntries agreed t hld a next rund f ________ (cnsult) as sn as pssible, but n date was given.②Have yu cnsulted yur lawyer ________ the cntract with yur new cmpany?③Nw yu had better cnsult ________ a physician.④If yu dn't feel well, remember ________ (cnsult) yur dctr befre taking any medicine.
3．deserve vi.&vt.應(yīng)受(報答或懲罰)；值得；應(yīng)得【典型例句】He des nt deserve t win any respect frm anybdy just because he des nt knw hw t respect thers.他不應(yīng)該從任何人那里得到尊重，只是因為他不懂如何尊重他人。?(1)deserve t d sth. 應(yīng)該做……；值得做……(2)deserve t be dne ＝ deserve ding ……值得被做deserve cnsideratin/attentin/a rest 值得考慮/注意/應(yīng)該休息
【拓展延伸】在deserve, need，want，require，bear等動詞，wrth等形容詞的后面，動名詞主動形式表示被動意義，其含義相當(dāng)于動詞不定式的被動形式?！揪毻缚键c】單句語法填空①The envirnment is and the present situatin bth deserve ________________ (pay) attentin t.②Maria is cnstantly making effrts；she deserves ________________ (achieve) the gal f entering the key university.
句型轉(zhuǎn)換——一句多譯保持開放的心態(tài)， 因為每個人的想法都值得考慮。③Keep an pen mind, because everyne's ideas ________________ .④Keep an pen mind, because everyne's ideas ________________.⑤Keep an pen mind, because everyne's ideas __________________ .【佳句背誦】With many wild animals gradually dying ut, the present situatin deserves attentin.由于許多野生動物逐漸滅絕，目前的形勢值得注意。
deserve cnsideratin
deserve cnsidering
deserve t be cnsidered
4．disability n．殘疾；無能；無資格【典型例句】The man brn with disability became the champin f the Paralympics, which was very hnurable. 這個人天生殘疾，但是他后來成為了殘奧會冠軍，這非常值得人敬佩。?(1)brn with disability 天生殘疾learning disability 學(xué)習(xí)障礙a physical/mental disability 生理缺陷/心理障礙(2)disabled nly 殘疾人專用mentally disabled 智障的care fr the sick, elderly and disabled 關(guān)愛老弱病殘(3)be able t d sth. 有能力做某事
【練透考點】單句語法填空①The famus singer made a prmise t the public that he wuld give away half f the year's incme t help ________ disabled. ②Such risk factrs and behaviur can lead t death, disease and ________ (disable)．③ The schl being built at present is said t be intended fr the ________ (disable) children.
Ⅱ.核心短語5．(be) dying t d sth.渴望做某事 【典型例句】I heard yu are dying fr sme advice n hw t make friends.我聽說你正渴望得到一些如何交友的建議。?be dying t d sth./fr sth. 渴望做某事＝be thirsty/hungry t d/fr sth.＝be anxius t d sth./fr sth.＝be eager t d sth./fr sth.＝lng t d sth./fr sth.
【練透考點】基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)——單句語法填空①After walking in the desert fr such a lng time, he was dying ________ a gd rest.②Mike is eager __________ (stay) away frm the busy city life fr a while.能力提升——完成句子首先，作為一名渴望學(xué)習(xí)知識的學(xué)生，你在學(xué)習(xí)中有必要形成一種有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法。(die)③Firstly, as a student wh ______________________， it is necessary t build an effective methd in yur study.
is dying t learn knwledge
6．in need f sth.需要某事【教材原句】Why help peple verseas when China has many areas that are in need f develpment? 為什么當(dāng)中國還有很多地方需要發(fā)展的時候卻去幫助海外的人？?in need f 需要in need 在困難中；在危急中satisfy/meet ne's needs 滿足某人的需要There is n need fr sb.t d sth. 某人沒有必要做某事
【練透考點】單句語法填空/完成句子①Deeds are better than wrds when peple are in need ________ help.②If we stay at hme, it is cmfrtable and there is n need ________ (spend) mney.③俗話說，患難朋友才是真正的朋友。As the saying ges, ___________________________.
a friend in need is a friend indeed
7．take sth. fr granted 認(rèn)為……理所應(yīng)當(dāng)【典型例句】Nwadays it is typical f a yung generatin t take it fr granted that parents shuld meet whatever the desire. 現(xiàn)在，年輕一代人總是認(rèn)為父母應(yīng)該滿足他們的所有愿望。
take ne's time 別著急，慢慢來take sth.seriusly 認(rèn)真對待某事 把……當(dāng)作……take it easy 輕松；不緊張；從容
【練透考點】單句語法填空①The dctr tld me t take ________ easy fr a few weeks.②When peple ask yu t d smething, yu shuld take it ________ (serius)．③Sme f us always take ________ fr granted that ur parents r grandparents shuld take care f us.④Never take my patience ________ a sign f weakness.
8．be wrth it 值得做【教材原句】Is her wrk wrth it? Yes, t the lives f the peple she is helping, it is wrth it.她的工作值得嗎？是的，對于那些她幫助過的人，這是值得的。(1)be (well) wrth ding ……(非常)值得做be wrth the mney/an effrt/a try/a visit 值得花錢/努力/一試/一游be wrth it 值得一干；值得花精力(或時間)(2)be wrthy f being dnebe wrthy t be dne ……值得做be wrthy f＋n.(＝be wrth＋n.) 值得……(3)It is wrthwhile t d/ding sth. 值得做某事
【練透考點】單句語法填空/一句多譯①It is ________ wrth making an effrt t prmte the public awareness f envirnmental prtectin.②Tm, the tp student f ur class, thinks studying is a very ________ (值得做的) wrk. ③Fllw it up, explre all arund it, and befre yu knw it, yu will have smething wrth ________ (think) abut t ccupy yur mind.④If yu want yur jurney t Xi'an enjyable and ________ (wrth), yu have t keep yur eyes pen.
[2018·全國卷Ⅱ書面表達]我認(rèn)為，Grwing Tgether 這部英文短片很值得觀看。⑤Persnally speaking, the shrt English film—Grwing Tgether ____________________ .⑥As far as I am cncerned, the shrt English film—Grwing Tgether ____________________ .⑦In my pinin/view, the shrt English film—Grwing Tgether ________________________ .
is well wrth watching
is well wrthy t be watched
is well wrthy f being watched
Ⅲ.典型句式精析9．“介詞＋關(guān)系副詞”引導(dǎo)的定語從句【教材原句】We walked fr tw and a half hurs t get there — first up a muntain t a ridge frm where we had fantastic views and then dwn a steep path t the valley belw.我們步行了兩個半小時才到達那里——先是爬山，爬到山脊能看到奇妙的景色，然后走下一個陡坡，一直走到下邊的山谷。本句中含frm where引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞a ridge，意思為“從山脊上”。在“介詞＋關(guān)系詞”型定語從句中，關(guān)系詞常為which和whm，但比較特殊的有frm where和since when, frm where相當(dāng)于and frm here/there, since when相當(dāng)于and frm then。She climbed up t the tp f the hill, frm where she culd have a gd view f the whle twn.(where ＝ n the tp f the hill)她登上山頂，從山頂上她可以一覽全鎮(zhèn)的風(fēng)光。
名師點津　frm which中的which指的是一個地點名詞；frm where中的where指的是一個地點狀語。China is the birthplace f kites, frm which kite-flying spread t Japan, Krea, Thailand and India.中國是風(fēng)箏的故鄉(xiāng)，從這里放風(fēng)箏傳到了日本、朝鮮、泰國和印度。
【練透考點】單句語法填空/翻譯句子①He hid himself behind the dr, frm ________ he saw the man take smething n the desk.②There are many websites, frm ________ yu can find almst all the necessary infrmatin.③他們爬上了塔頂，從那里他們能看到遠(yuǎn)處正在發(fā)生的事情。________________________________________________________________________
They climbed t the tp f the twer, frm where they culd see what was happening in the distance.
10．狀語從句的省略【典型例句】When ht, he placed them in an empty il drum with kau kau (sweet ptat), crn and greens.燃燒(石頭)之后，他把石頭放進一個空油桶里，加上一些考考(紅薯)、玉米和青菜?！揪涫椒治觥烤渲蠾hen ht是一個省略句，補全后為When they are ht。
S while sitting in the classrm and ding my papers, I felt cnfident and was full f energy. 因此，當(dāng)我坐在教室做試卷時，感到精力旺盛，信心十足?！癟he prize mney is t little t affrd even half f a living rm in Beijing，” Tu Yuyu tld the jurnalist jkingly when asked hw t spend the prize mney.當(dāng)被問及如何花這筆獎金時，屠呦呦開玩笑地告訴記者，“獎金少，不夠在北京買半個客廳”。 Unless necessary, yu'd better nt refer t the dictinary.除非有必要，否則你最好不要查詞典。
【練透考點】用所給動詞的適當(dāng)形式填空/完成句子①While ________ (climb) the muntain, we enjyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.②When ________ (ask) abut the secret f his success, he said that he wed much f his success and happiness t his wife and children.③He pened his muth as if ________ (say) smething.④當(dāng)我有不同的看法時，我會選擇放棄并尊重大多數(shù)人的意見。________________________， I may chse t give it up and respect the pinin f the majrity.
When having a different pinin
Ⅰ.高考能力同步化——單句語法填空/單詞拼寫1．[2020·江蘇高考]Adapted in imaginative ways, many have reappeared n city streets and village greens ________ (huse) tiny cafes, cellphne repair shps r even defibrillatr machines (除顫器)．2．[2019·全國卷Ⅰ]Further up, the weather changed—lw cluds envelpe the muntainsides, which are cvered with thick grass. I cunt twelve ________ (shade) f green frm where I stand.3．[2020·全國卷Ⅲ]The beautiful lng branches ________ (cver) with pink-clred buds (蓓蕾) make fantastic decratins.4．[2019·天津高考]Sme peple tend t lk dwn upn ________ (disable) peple and regard them as unfit fr a regular life.5．[2019·天津高考]At the end f yur ________ (合同) yu must arrange a time with the ffice staff t check ut.
6．Fr a lng time, mental ________ was cnsidered shameful and the mentally ________ received little treatment r encuragement.(disable)7．I am ________ (privilege) t have a chance t share my experience as an exchange student in Oxfrd with all f yu.8．The man ________ (resign) frm the Hpe Prject, because, he said, he was nt cntent with the systems mnitring the charity rganizatins.9．The scientist made great cntributins t science, s he ________ (deserve)giving s many awards.10．We believe that nly a ________ and fully cnfident middle class will guarantee the ________ and prsperity f Hng Kng.(stable)
Ⅱ.必備知識試題化——完成句子1．Yu must keep yur eyes pen if yu are ging t ___________________________________________________.要使你的英國之行愉快且值得，你就必須留心觀察。2．Alice std at the windw, _________________________________ ____________. Alice站在窗戶旁邊，從那里她可以觀看同學(xué)們踢足球。3．In my view, it is table manners that yu shuld pay special attentin t ________________________________.依我看來，參加晚宴你應(yīng)該特別注意餐桌禮儀。(狀語從句省略)
make yur trip t the United Kingdm enjyable and wrthwhile
frm where she culd watch her classmates playing ftball
when attending the dinner party
4．I _________________ frm a serius illness ________ I received an invitatin t an imprtant meeting.我剛剛從重病中恢復(fù)過來就收到了一個重要會議的邀請。5．Our class is made up f 52 students, all f whm are friendly and hard-wrking. ________________ yu can get alng well with them.我們班有52 名學(xué)生，大家都很友好，學(xué)習(xí)用功，毫無疑問你會和他們相處好的。
had just recvered
There is n dubt that
Ⅲ.教材語篇高考化——語法填空閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。J is a yung Australian wman wh wrked as a vlunteer teacher in Papua New Guinea fr tw years. She thught it wnderful t hear 1.________ her friend, Rsemary, wh was dying t hear all abut her life there. The high schl 2.________ she wrked was a bush schl, whse classrms were made f bamb and grass. The ther day when J 3._____________ (shw) the bys the 4.________ (week) chemistry experiment, the mixture was bubbling befre she knew it.The bys wh had never cme acrss anything like this befre were s frightened that they started jumping ut f the windws. 5.________ J wndered if chemistry was relevant t the kids, she tried t make a 6.________ __(different) t the bys' lives.
Last weekend J went with anther teacher t visit a village which was the hme f ne f the bys, Tmbe. When they arrived, Tmbe's mther, wh 7._________________ (pull) weeds in her garden, started crying“ieee ieee” and his father led them t his huse, a lw bamb hut with grass 8.________ (stick) ut f the rf.There being n windws and the drway being just big enugh t get thrugh, the hut was s dark inside that it tk time fr her eyes 9._________ (adjust). After dinner, J nticed a can standing upside dwn n the grill ver the fire 10.___________ (heat) t dry ut the leftver fd.
had been pulling
t be heated
你校學(xué)生會需招聘一名留學(xué)生做英語學(xué)習(xí)顧問，請你以短文形式寫一則招聘啟事。內(nèi)容主要包括： 1．母語是英語，漢語流利者優(yōu)先2．解答英語學(xué)習(xí)問題，協(xié)助組織英語活動3．每周4小時，報酬面議4．聯(lián)系人：李華(Tel：13011223344)注意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。English Advisr Wanted_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Student Unin
Step 1　斟酌打磨　豐富句式1．精挑細(xì)選——核心詞匯想周全①_______________________ 　　　我們這里為你準(zhǔn)備了一個職位②________________ 迫切需要③ _________________________________________ 解決學(xué)生的英語學(xué)習(xí)問題④____________________________ 請盡快和我們聯(lián)系⑤___________________________ 符合要求
we have a psitin available fr yu
be in great need f
settling dwn the students' prblems in English learning
please d nt hesitate t cntact with us
meet ur requirements
2．遣詞造句——句式升級是亮點句式升級：①We want a freign student wh culd wrk in ur Student Unin.(句子太口語化；應(yīng)該選用更加正式的表達)→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②When yu jin us in ur Student Unin, yu are expected t be respnsible fr prviding assistance within all parts f the English activities rganized.(狀語從句省略)→_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③Yu shuld wrk fur hurs each week. (句子太口語化；應(yīng)該選用更加正式的表達)→___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If yu happen t be an verseas student, we may have a psitin available fr yu in ur Student Unin.
When jining us in ur Student Unin, yu are expected t be respnsible fr prving assistance within all parts f the English activities rganized.
It is required that the applicant shuld wrk fur hurs each week.
Step 2　邏輯銜接　連句成文
【思路點撥】　首先分析這篇文章是招聘啟事， 屬于公告性的應(yīng)用文，且為應(yīng)用文中較為正式的一類題材，因此在寫這一類文章的時候，要注意在內(nèi)容上做到客觀描述，時態(tài)多為一般現(xiàn)在時；其次就是大家所必須要經(jīng)歷的步驟：一定要聯(lián)系所有要點，構(gòu)建出合理的，有邏輯的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，本文在寫作時不必拘泥于所給出的提綱順序，而是按照寫作需要來重新安排順序。
參考范文：English Advisr WantedWe are in great need f an English advisr whse mther tngue is English and wh can speak fluent Chinese. If yu happen t be an verseas student, we may have a psitin available fr yu. When yu jin us in ur Student Unin, yu are expected t be respnsible fr prving assistance within all parts f the English activities rganized, such as English Speech Cntest, English crner and s n. Helping with settling dwn the students' prblems in English learning is als necessary. It is required that the applicant shuld wrk fur hurs each week. As fr the pay, it is pen t discussin during the interview until a satisfactry result is reached. If yu can meet ur requirements and are willing t wrk with us, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 fr an interview.Student Unin