01讀后續(xù)寫：親情類（故事構(gòu)造“三板斧”）-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版）

這是一份01讀后續(xù)寫：親情類（故事構(gòu)造“三板斧”）-2022年新高考英語讀后續(xù)寫核心技能突破（PPT課件版），共35頁。PPT課件主要包含了母子關(guān)系，父子關(guān)系，父女關(guān)系，姐妹關(guān)系，兄弟之間，祖孫之間，夫妻之間等內(nèi)容，歡迎下載使用。
第一板斧：沖突構(gòu)造（誤會(huì)、犯錯(cuò)等）
只有沖突才能體會(huì)親情的彌足珍貴。沖突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代溝）、誤會(huì)等。
1、生氣1. 我媽媽瞪著我，這是在我有一個(gè)重組家庭之前她從未做過的事。 “你可以撿起來的。”她說?！澳遣艑?duì)?！保ū究梢?，虛擬語氣）My mther glanced at me. Smething she never did befre I had a stepfamily. “Yu culd have picked it up. ” she said. “That wuld have been the kind thing t d.”2.他生氣地握緊拳頭，但是弟弟卻激動(dòng)地?fù)]著手。He flded his fist angrily, but his yunger brther waved his hands 試著說什么，但Carter太生氣了，他一個(gè)字也聽不進(jìn)去。（對(duì)比，夸張）Jacksn kept saying smething, but s angry was Carter that he culdn’t even hear a wrd .
2、后悔1. 我意識(shí)到我裙子上的蝴蝶結(jié)打得很不好。我本應(yīng)該請(qǐng)媽媽幫忙的。I realized hw prly I tied the string n my skirt which was ver leggings. I shuld have asked mm fr help.
3、內(nèi)疚1.一想到我對(duì)他所做的一切，遺憾和內(nèi)疚就像沒休止的潮水一樣向我襲來。Thinking abut what I had dne t him, regret and guilt verwhelmed me like endless tides. 2.每當(dāng)我想到亨利濕了的書，我的臉都會(huì)變紅了。Whenever I thught f Henry’s wet bk, my face turned red.
4、煩惱Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frwned.看著雪莉的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。（汕頭市高三第一學(xué)期質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)）
5、傷心當(dāng)她望過她三歲妹妹的桌子時(shí)，Amanda感覺她的心情像天空一樣灰暗。（比喻）Amanda felt as gray as the sky utside when she lked acrss the table at her three-year-ld sister.
6、犯錯(cuò)1.T cver his terrible actin（為了掩蓋他糟糕的行為，不定式作狀語）, the terrified by glued the pieces tgether hastily and put the vase back t its punishment（害怕懲罰，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）, the suddenly inspired by said that a neighbur’s cat jumped in frm the windw and he culdn’t drive it away n matter hw hard he at the chclates with hesitatin,(猶豫地看著著巧克力,非謂語), the by timidly raised his head befre his mther.
第二板斧：沖突化解（解釋、道歉、彌補(bǔ)、回憶等）
1、道歉1.“對(duì)不起，”他說到，輕輕的摸摸Jacksn的頭。（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）“I’m s srry.”he said, gently petting Jacksn’s head.2.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼，然后低下了頭。（動(dòng)作鏈）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）He put dwn his hand, glanced cautiusly at Carter and lwered his her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her aplgy fr ignring my lneliness （為她忽略我的孤獨(dú)道歉）as well as my difficulty with English cmmunicatin.（2021年沈陽市一模）的微笑漸漸消失，彼得皺起了眉頭。（汕頭市高三第一學(xué)期質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)）
2、原諒1. 他媽媽把手指放在他嘴唇讓他停止說話，在他額頭上吻了一下，然后走出了書房。（動(dòng)作鏈）（2021 廣一模）His mther silenced him by gently putting her finger n his lips，gave a sft kiss n his frehead and walked ut f the study.
3、開心1. “我想給你一個(gè)驚喜！”他指向一個(gè)包裝精美的盒子，眼里閃爍著光芒。（with結(jié)構(gòu)）“I wanted t surprise yu!” he pinted at a neatly wrapped bx with his eyes gleaming.2.看到他的家人圍坐著，和諧地待在一起，卡特感覺到一種幸福感。（ding非謂語）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）Seeing his families sitting tgether and staying tgether harmniusly, Cater felt a surge f happiness.3.歡快的歌唱飄蕩在房間里，兩姐妹沉浸在音樂的美中。（獨(dú)立主格）（2020.11溫州一模） Cheerful singing flating in the rm, the tw sisters immersed themselves in the beauty f the music.
4、感激1.But fr Henry’s help, I wuldn’t have finished my perfrmance smthly. 如果沒有亨利的幫助，我就不會(huì)順利地完成我的演出了（2021年南通市二模）。2. I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))我看著她，愛和感激的淚水在我的眼中涌起。（2021年沈陽市一模）3. Afterwards, it was my turn t give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude t my mm and friends, bwing(bw) t them several times. （定語從句，非謂語）之后，輪到我做一個(gè)小型講座，在會(huì)上我向媽媽和朋友表達(dá)了真誠(chéng)的感謝，多次向他們鞠躬
5、回憶1. 在這時(shí)，毫無預(yù)料地，Carter突然想起B(yǎng)illy躺在地上哭的回憶，一直在他腦?；匦?，提醒著他一些事情。（無靈主語句；ding非謂語；and連接兩個(gè)同時(shí)進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作）（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）At that mment, unexpectedly, the memry f the sight f Billy crying n the grund ccurred t Carter, hvering in his mind and reminding him smething .2.看著Jacksn，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那輛車的情景。（2021.4 湖麗衢三地聯(lián)考）Lking at Jacksn, Carter culdn’t help imagining his little brther spending the whle day carefully painting the car.3. “我只希望我知道如何幫助她，”阿曼達(dá)自言自語，想起李驚恐的眼睛（2020.11溫州一模） “I just wish I knew hw t help her,” Amanda said t herself, thinking f Li’s frightened eyes（想到Li害怕的雙眼）.
第三板斧：親情升華（誠(chéng)實(shí)、珍惜等）
1. Frm then n, the three chclates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended t lie, reminding him t be hnest提醒他要誠(chéng)實(shí)(非謂語).（2021 廣一模）2. I ndded firmly, knwing a flwer f kindness and friendship began t blssm（善良和友誼之花開放） in bth f ur hearts.（2021年南通市二模）
3.This experience transfrmed my attitude twards Henry and ur relatinship has als been harmnius（我們的關(guān)系變得和諧） since then.（2021年南通市二模）4. 正是亨利的善良讓我感受到了我們家庭的溫暖。我會(huì)用心珍惜它的。（2021年南通市二模）It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth frm ur family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
親情類場(chǎng)景描寫（七大關(guān)系）
1.D yu mean that eve flwer has its wn beauty asked my mther thughtfully.I ndded withut hesitatin, as if a secnd wasted culd deprive the dandelins f thei life."The same t yu," she added, her vice sft""Nt everyne can be a rse,and it is als an hnr t be a dandelin." Knwing that my mther had realized my pain, I tk ff the mask that I had wrn fr the whle lunch time and pured ut my unease heartily She listened t me patiently and patted me n the back tenderly.Suddenly she stpped, as if t say smething.“你的意思是那朵夜花有它自己的美麗嗎？”媽媽沉思地問。 我毫不猶豫地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，仿佛一秒鐘的浪費(fèi)就能剝奪蒲公英的生命。 “你也一樣，”她又說，“不是每個(gè)人都能成為一朵玫瑰，成為蒲公英也是一種榮譽(yù)?！?我知道媽媽已經(jīng)意識(shí)到了我的痛苦，我摘下了我整個(gè)午餐時(shí)間戴的面具，盡情地傾訴我的不安。她耐心地聽著我的話，溫柔地拍了拍我的背。 突然，她停了下來，好像在說什么。
"But yu will be a beautiful narratr." Mm said. She reminded me f hw fluently I culd deliver my part at hme.It was at that time that I understd that maybe I was mre suitable fr a rle back stage like a narratr. Frm then n, I practiced my lines heart and sul with my mther at lunch time fr weeks. And the perfrmance apprached ultimately Standing backstage, nervusness came flding in me.What encuraged me t vercme it was the inspiratin frm the beautiful yellw dandelins. The perfrmance that night was eventually a big success.Hearing the thunderus applause, I tk pride in my rle and firmly believed that even a dandelin had its wn beauty. “但你將會(huì)成為一個(gè)美麗的敘述者。”媽媽說。她讓我想起了我在家里可以多么流利地扮演我的角色。正是在那個(gè)時(shí)候，我明白也許我更適合像敘述者這樣的角色。從那時(shí)起，我在午餐時(shí)間和母親一起練習(xí)了好幾周。演出最終站在后臺(tái)，緊張情緒涌上心頭。鼓勵(lì)我克服它的是靈感來自于美麗的黃色蒲公英。當(dāng)晚的演出最終大獲成功。聽到雷鳴般的掌聲，我為自己的角色感到自豪，堅(jiān)信甚至蒲公英也有自己的美。
The man, seeing that the by already had mney started t get angry again."Hw can yu be s selfish?Why d yu want mre mney since yu already have these bills?" the father culd hardly hld his anger back and inquired with tw eyebrws knitted int ne. With held-back tears in his eyes, the little by slwly and carefully cunted ut his mney, and then lked up at his father, replying,"Because I didn't have enugh befre, but nw I d." with big blue eyes]shining with tears.那個(gè)男人，看到那個(gè)男孩已經(jīng)有錢了，又開始生氣了。 “你怎么這么自私？ 既然你已經(jīng)有了這些賬單，你為什么還要更多的錢？” 父親幾乎不能忍住他的憤怒，用兩個(gè)眉毛編織成一個(gè)。 小男孩含著淚水，慢慢地小心地?cái)?shù)出他的錢，然后抬頭看著他的父親，回答說：“因?yàn)槲乙郧皼]有足夠的錢，但現(xiàn)在我有了。” 帶著藍(lán)色的大眼睛]眼淚閃閃發(fā)光。
Nt knwing what his sn meant, the father just std there, waiting fr his by's explanatin.Wiping away his tears and an inncent smile appearing n his face, the by requested in a relieved vice,"Daddy, I have $20 nw. Can I buy an hur frm yu?Please cme hme early tmrrw.I want t have dinner with yu." Hearing the by's small but sincere request, the father culdn't hld back his tears.Realizing he was t busy with his business t spare sme time with his belved nes, he gathered his sn int his arms and aplgized again and again,"Srry., and I prmise I'Il be back early tmrrw."他不知道兒子的意思，父親就站在那里等著兒子的解釋。男孩擦去眼淚，臉上露出天真的微笑，用松了一口氣的聲音問道：“爸爸，我現(xiàn)在有$20了。我能從你那里買到一個(gè)小時(shí)嗎？請(qǐng)明天早點(diǎn)回家。我想和你共吃晚飯?！甭牭侥泻⑿《嬲\(chéng)的請(qǐng)求，父親忍不住流住了眼淚。意識(shí)到自己忙了，沒有時(shí)間和心愛的人在一起，他把兒子抱在懷里，一遍又一遍地道歉：“抱歉。我保證明天早點(diǎn)回來?！?br/> T my surprise, Mlly gave the bag t me nce again several days later. The same bag and same stuff inside.I felt frgiven,and trusted and lved.And a little mre cmfrtable wearing the title f father. Over several mnths, the bag with the nte in went with me frm time t time.In time Mlly turned her attentin t ther things. She fund ther treasures,lst in new games, and grew up.I was left hlding the bag.She gave it t me ne mrning and never asked fr its return. And s I have it still.令我吃驚的是，幾天后莫莉又把這個(gè)包給了我。同樣的袋子和同樣的東西。我感到被寬恕，被信任和被愛。穿上父親的頭銜會(huì)更舒服一點(diǎn)。幾個(gè)月多了，那個(gè)帶著紙條的包不時(shí)地跟著我走。不久，莫莉把注意力轉(zhuǎn)向了其他事情。她還發(fā)現(xiàn)了其他在新游戲中丟失的寶藏，然后長(zhǎng)大了。我一直拿著袋子。一天早上，她把它給了我，但從來沒有要求讓它回來。所以我還在那里。
Ali lked up and saw the ther bys rushing ahead. Refusing t give up at this pint, he jumped t his feet and ran as fast as he culd.He dashed acrss the finish line and wn the furth prize. Thinking he wuld let her sister dwn, Ali culdn't help sbbing.Just then he suddenly heard the annuncement frm the bradcast that he wn the third prize as the runner wh cllided with Ali was disqualified fr breaking the rule.Hlding the shes clse t his chest during the award ceremny, Ali felt verjyed and relieved as he eventually wn the shes fr his sister.阿里抬起頭，看到其他男孩沖在前面。 在這一點(diǎn)上，他拒絕放棄，他跳起來，跑得盡可能快。 他沖過終點(diǎn)線，獲得了四等獎(jiǎng)。 以為他會(huì)讓她妹妹失望，阿里忍不住抽泣起來。 就在這時(shí)，他突然聽到廣播中宣布，他贏得了三等獎(jiǎng)，因?yàn)榕c阿里相撞的跑步者因違反規(guī)則而被取消資格。 在頒獎(jiǎng)典禮上，阿里把鞋子緊貼在胸前，感到欣喜若狂，松了一口氣，因?yàn)樗罱K為他的妹妹贏得了鞋子。
There was n fence at all.It was a bridge! A bridge stretched frm ne side f the creek t the ther!Jhn was abut t cmplain abut everything,when he fund the neighbr,his yung brther,was cming acrss the bridge,his hands utstretched."Yu are quite a fellw t build this bridge after all I have said and dne," said Jhn's brther. The tw brthers met in the middle,taking each ther's hand and hugging each ther.根本沒有柵欄。 是一座橋！ 一座橋從小溪的一邊延伸到另一邊！ 約翰正要抱怨一切，當(dāng)他發(fā)現(xiàn)鄰居，他的弟弟，正在過橋，他的手伸出。 約翰的哥哥說：“我說了這么多，你真是個(gè)造橋的好朋友。 兩兄弟在中間相遇，牽著對(duì)方的手，互相擁抱。
The envelpe was frm grandma. She had knwn hw sick she was.In the envelpe was enugh mney t pay fr the rest f my cllege year and a request that I take pian lessns in her memry. Mved t tears,I determined t learn pian lessns by heart and my memry f grandma mtivated me t practice day and night.I dn't think the pian piece was even played with mre feeling than it was my secnd year in cllege. Nw,years later, when I walk by a pian, I smile and think f Grandma. She is playing the pian smilingly in heaven,I am sure. 那個(gè)信封是從奶奶那里寄來的。她已經(jīng)知道自己病得有多厲害了。信封里有足夠的錢來支付我大學(xué)剩下的時(shí)間，并要求我為她上鋼琴課。我哭了，決心用心學(xué)鋼琴，對(duì)奶奶的記憶激勵(lì)我日夜練習(xí)。我甚至不認(rèn)為這首鋼琴曲比我上大學(xué)的第二年更有感情。幾年后，當(dāng)我走過鋼琴時(shí)，我微笑著想起了奶奶。我相信，她是在天堂微笑著彈鋼琴的。
Tears f happiness pured dwn Susan's cheeks.With tears f happiness in her eyes, she std mtinlessly facing the ppsite side f the street, as if gazing at smene.Althugh she culdn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thught she was actually lucky,fr he had given her a gift mre pwerful than sight, a gift f lve that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little wrried,he saw his wife break in t a radiant smile and blw a kiss t his directin. Finally she fund back herself, blind but attractive and cnfident as she used t be. 幸福的淚水順著蘇珊的臉頰流下來。 她眼里含著幸福的淚水，一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地站在街道對(duì)面，仿佛在凝視著某人。 雖然她看不到他的身體，但她絕對(duì)感覺到馬克的存在。 蘇珊認(rèn)為她實(shí)際上是幸運(yùn)的，因?yàn)樗o了她一份比視力更強(qiáng)大的禮物，一份愛的禮物，可以在黑暗中帶來光明。 就在馬克有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心的時(shí)候，他看到他的妻子露出燦爛的微笑，朝他的方向吹了一個(gè)吻。 最后，她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己回來了，她失明了，但像以前一樣有吸引力和自信。